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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Mamoru's latest journal entries May 12th 2009 00:29
Today, I went and had a drink with my friends.
We had gone to same high school and belonged to swimming club.
We had practiceed swimming hard together.
All of us are going to different university.
One lives in Okinawa, another lives in kyoto, and the other lives in Nagoya.
We talked about what we had done together when were high school students, what we are doing in each other's university, what we want to do in the future and so on.
I really enjoyed talking with them and thought from the heart that nothing is more important than friends.
May 12th 2009 09:54 jumbocrunk
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  • Japanese

  • see one another for the first time in 3 years
  • See one another for the first time in 3 years
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  • Today, I went and had a drink with my friends.
  • Today I went and had a drink with my friends.
Comment  
  • We had gone to same high school and belonged to swimming club.
  • We had gone to same high school and belonged to the swimming club.
Comment  
  • We had practiceed swimming hard together.
  • We had practiced swimming hard together.
Comment  
  • All of us are going to different university.
  • All of us are going to different universities.
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  • One lives in Okinawa, another lives in kyoto, and the other lives in Nagoya.
  • One lives in Okinawa, another lives in Kyoto, and the other lives in Nagoya.
Comment  
  • We talked about what we had done together when were high school students, what we are doing in each other's university, what we want to do in the future and so on.
  • We talked about what we had done together when were high school students, what we are doing in our university, what we want to do in the future and so on.
Comment  
Excellent work. Friends are very important.
May 13th 2009 04:43

  • see one another for the first time in 3 years
  • See Each Other for the First Time in 3 Years
Comment  
  • We had gone to same high school and belonged to swimming club.
  • We had gone to the same high school and belonged to the swimming club.
Comment  
  • We had practiceed swimming hard together.
  • We had practiced swimming hard together.
Comment  
  • One lives in Okinawa, another lives in kyoto, and the other lives in Nagoya.
  • One lives in Okinawa, another lives in Kyoto, and the other lives in Nagoya.
Comment  
  • We talked about what we had done together when were high school students, what we are doing in each other's university, what we want to do in the future and so on.
  • We talked about what we had done together when we were high school students; what we are doing at each other's university, what we want to do in the future, and so on.
Comment  
  • I really enjoyed talking with them and thought from the heart that nothing is more important than friends.
  • I really enjoyed talking with them, and I thought from the heart that nothing is more important than friends.
Comment  
これはいいですよ。

大切なものは友達ですね。

がんばりましょう。
May 13th 2009 21:58 Bum
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  • Japanese

  • see one another for the first time in 3 years
  • Seeing one another for the first time in 3 years
Comment  
  • We had gone to same high school and belonged to swimming club.
  • We had all went to same high school and belonged to the swimming club.
Comment  
  • We had practiceed swimming hard together.
  • We had practiced swimming together.
Comment  
  • All of us are going to different university.
  • All of us are going to different universities.
Comment  
  • One lives in Okinawa, another lives in kyoto, and the other lives in Nagoya.
  • One lives in Okinawa, another lives in Kyoto, and the other lives in Nagoya.
Comment  
  • We talked about what we had done together when were high school students, what we are doing in each other's university, what we want to do in the future and so on.
  • We talked about what we had done together when we were high school students, what we will be doing in each others' university, what we want to do in the future and so on.
Comment  
  • I really enjoyed talking with them and thought from the heart that nothing is more important than friends.
  • I really enjoyed talking with them and my heartfelt thoughts are that nothing is more important than friends.
Comment  
マモルさんの英語上手ですね～
May 14th 2009 21:39 euGenie
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  • Japanese, Mandarin

  • Today, I went and had a drink with my friends.
  • Today, I went and had a drink with my friends.
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Today, I (went and) had a drink with my friends. 日本語と中国語そうなの文法があります：食事に行く、（中国語：去吃饭）。でも、英語はちょっと違います。
We went for a drink (ok)
I had a drink with my friends (ok)
I went and had a drink with my friends. (went ＝行った；でもどこへ行ったの？もし、そういったら：I'll go and get a drink=show purpose(ok) Go and get me a drink=tell somebody what to do.(ok)

Today, I went and had a drink with my friends.文法は正しいけれど、使い方はちょっとね。
Mamoru
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