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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of isisfish's latest journal entries May 14th 2009 01:08 english england travelling
Since I graduated from university, I didn't have any English class. I was try to remember more words, but when you're getting older, your memory are lose faster...XD

I like travelling, so I think English is very important to me.

I had been to London twice. The first and the only Europe city that I visited. I can't forget the beautiful sky and the wonderful weather in summer London. I stay in central London and the east-south England. So far my favorite city near London is Bath. I hope next time I can stay there at least a week.

I also want to visit other cities in Europe; I'll try hard to make this come true.

So, that's why I want to keep learning English. :D
May 14th 2009 08:00 Matt
  • English
  • Japanese, Italian

  • Since I graduated from university, I didn't have any English class.
  • Since I graduated from university, I haven't taken any English classes.
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  • I was try to remember more words, but when you're getting older, your memory are lose faster...
  • I have been trying to remember more words, but when you get older, you lose your memory fast...
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  • I had been to London twice.
  • I have been to London twice.
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  • The first and the only Europe city that I visited.
  • That's the first and the only European city that I have visited.
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  • I can't forget the beautiful sky and the wonderful weather in summer London.
  • I can't forget the beautiful sky and the wonderful weather (during the summer in London / in London during the summer.
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  • I stay in central London and the east-south England.
  • I stayed in central London and the southeast England.
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  • I also want to visit other cities in Europe; I'll try hard to make this come true.
  • I also want to visit other cities in Europe; I'll try hard to make this happen. (but the original sentence is technically correct, although saying "come true" would often be used with saying "make this wish come true" or "make this dream come true", etc., which is a stronger emotion than you may intend.)
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This is great. Most of my comments are more stylistic in nature, rather than technical corrections. London is an amazing city, isn't it? I hope you get to travel to all of the other European destinations that interest you!
May 14th 2009 22:21 isisfish
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  • Japanese, English

Thank you very much, Matt.
I'm glad to read your comment.
I'll practice my English more often on Lang-8.:)
I think I need to be more careful in the tense and how to use "have". ^^

Yes, London is an amazing city. I love it so much and want to come back again and again. But I still hope to discovery others European cities!
isisfish
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  • Japanese, English

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