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Travelling to Europe Sounds good. I wish I had been more motivated to travel, instead of using family as an excuse to waste opportunity. Alex
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The progress of apartment h... This entry was really good, some of the vocab you used about the residential market was awesome (things I would really struggle with in m...
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Summer Vacation I still regret not going to Europe when I lived on the east coast. Some of the most amazing natural areas in the world on on the east coa...
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I've started playing golf. Golf is for cultural dinosaurs. There are better ways to get exercise. Golf courses are one of the most environmentally damaging thing in...
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My pants are getting tighter. Syn san,
Thanks for corrections and comments. I try to control my weight. It's not difficult. Actually, my weight had been almost unchan...
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My pants are getting tighter. Well done and good luck. Remember to order vegetable sides dishes to offset the amount of fatty food your consume. Exercise is also a mus...
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American people like free f... My Father, who is one of the most self critical Americans you'll meet, always told me there is no such thing as a free lunch. My Mother, ...
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How can I select wine? Your writing is near perfect and an English teacher could find as many mistakes in my corrections as I found in your original.I hope it h...
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They don't go to restaurant... Haha. Most of the people at my office eat lunch at their desk because they are stressed out about deadlines and are trying to get their w...
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American people like free f... Haha. Everyone likes free stuff, right?
This reminds me of being in college. Everyone knew to frequent the art show openings because y...
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I returned from Boston. Yay! Boston! I hope you had a good time! We have been having so much rain and cloudy weather lately. I hope you had a good trip and got t...
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American people like free f... Yeah, everyone likes free food. Graduate students are the worst though - they will go to events all over campus just to eat (steal?) the...
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American people like free f... I think most Americans would like anything if it's free. Especially while they're in somewhere like Japan where things are generally more...
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Where can I have dinner alo... Yeah...its rare to see someone eating alone in a restaurant for dinner...and its true some people will think that you don't have any frie...
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I scare clippers in a barber. hahaha I didn't know that men in japan don't usually go to a barber...its like rare to see a guy in a salon here hahaha...you can tell th...
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Raining days in NY OMG I know ...trust me this is not your typical NYC weather its been unusually rainy this whole month its getting so annoying this never...
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Hurry up, NYDMV! Ya you passed..are you waiting for your learners permit? Be warned even though they say 10 days it usually takes them 4 weeks or more...e...
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Hurry up, NYDMV! Good luck with that
Peace
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Signals change so quickly! Its so true...but the longer you live here the more you kind of get used to it...they do it like that because traffic is always packed in...
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Luxury Apart in Manhattan すごい!what street was that building on, I've probably passed by it a bunch of times and not even noticed it lol.
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Luxury Apart in Manhattan Your English is very good! I didn't need to make many changes. The last sentence is just my preference. You can use what you have but I w...
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Driving lisence in NY your english is great!!! hope you don't mind me correcting a few things ^.^~!! Wow I can't believe you are taking your test in Manhattan....
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Driving lisence in NY Having a car in Manhattan is foolish. I live in Brooklyn and even here I wouldn't want to worry about a car when I can walk 1 block and g...
Woohoo!!!
Hi Nacho, Thanks for your comment. I like to learn a lot through the travel. I hope it would be exciting. mogo
Sounds good. I wish I had been more motivated to travel, instead of using family as an excuse to waste opportunity. Alex
This entry was really good, some of the vocab you used about the residential market was awesome (things I would really struggle with in m...
Your English is very well written here. I've never lived in an apartment in Brooklyn.
Drink plenty of water, or the humidity will make you even more miserable!
Great job and good post, keep it up. Thanks for the tips on salad. (*_*)
I still regret not going to Europe when I lived on the east coast. Some of the most amazing natural areas in the world on on the east coa...
Golf is for cultural dinosaurs. There are better ways to get exercise. Golf courses are one of the most environmentally damaging thing in...
Syn san, Thanks for corrections and comments. I try to control my weight. It's not difficult. Actually, my weight had been almost unchan...
Well done and good luck. Remember to order vegetable sides dishes to offset the amount of fatty food your consume. Exercise is also a mus...
My Father, who is one of the most self critical Americans you'll meet, always told me there is no such thing as a free lunch. My Mother, ...
どうもありがとう。私も「あいのうた」が好きです。 あなたはボストンに行きましたか? 私はボストンの近くに住んでいますよ。^^ 小さい世界ですね。
Your writing is near perfect and an English teacher could find as many mistakes in my corrections as I found in your original.I hope it h...
Haha. Most of the people at my office eat lunch at their desk because they are stressed out about deadlines and are trying to get their w...
Haha. Everyone likes free stuff, right? This reminds me of being in college. Everyone knew to frequent the art show openings because y...
Yay! Boston! I hope you had a good time! We have been having so much rain and cloudy weather lately. I hope you had a good trip and got t...
Yeah, everyone likes free food. Graduate students are the worst though - they will go to events all over campus just to eat (steal?) the...
I think most Americans would like anything if it's free. Especially while they're in somewhere like Japan where things are generally more...
I like free food and drinks too!!
Try to get one or two songs when sleepy. A bit of music may wake you up.
The sentence I corrected is just a variety for your English.
この感じしっています!コーヒーを飲んだらどうですか?散歩もいいと思う。:)
It must get hot in the city in summer! Hope you find some bargain clothes!
Yeah...its rare to see someone eating alone in a restaurant for dinner...and its true some people will think that you don't have any frie...
I like Japan's two-way garbage, everything in Japan is more clean! Nice journal entry!
hahaha I didn't know that men in japan don't usually go to a barber...its like rare to see a guy in a salon here hahaha...you can tell th...
OMG I know ...trust me this is not your typical NYC weather its been unusually rainy this whole month its getting so annoying this never...
Ya you passed..are you waiting for your learners permit? Be warned even though they say 10 days it usually takes them 4 weeks or more...e...
Good luck with that Peace
since you helped me out with my speech. I'll help you with this. :)
Its so true...but the longer you live here the more you kind of get used to it...they do it like that because traffic is always packed in...
すごい!what street was that building on, I've probably passed by it a bunch of times and not even noticed it lol.
Your English is very good! I didn't need to make many changes. The last sentence is just my preference. You can use what you have but I w...
your english is great!!! hope you don't mind me correcting a few things ^.^~!! Wow I can't believe you are taking your test in Manhattan....
Having a car in Manhattan is foolish. I live in Brooklyn and even here I wouldn't want to worry about a car when I can walk 1 block and g...
おもしろいですね。ただ僕はたいていそんな店をあまり使って行かないので、コメントをあげることができない。:) Aaron