I want my business email edited

Hello. everyone- the following is my business mail. so if anyone's mother tongue is English, please edit bellow email! :) Dear, ...

Have u seen the movie "he's not that into u"?

This is what I wrote in english after I saw the movie. The movie was quite impressed and i tried to write a description of my impression...

This is what I've been looking for!

HELLO Everyone! specially to native speaker or anyone who can speack English fluently or interested in studying English. I am excited ...