I like swimming!

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Amy's latest journal entries Oct 24th 2009 23:14
Since I was getting weight, I have been done many kinds of exercises.
Playing squash, badminton, tennis and table tennis, doing dance sports, going to a fitness club, hiking, and so on....
These are quite interesting and helpful for losing weight, but too hard for me to last for a long time.
Everytime I exhasted and looked for another sports, I gained weight back.The same thing had happened again and again, until I totally gave up the perfect body.
Then, one day, someone recommended a swim.
Swim was not included in my sports' list always; I was too shy to wear a swimsuit. (If I had known the water in a pool was acutally my shouder-high, I would have tried three years ago.)
Anyway, I decied to give a try and now swimming is my favorite sports. :)
These days, I swim with fins. sooo exciting!
Oct 24th 2009 23:27 jess_man1999

  • Since I was getting weight, I have been done many kinds of exercises.
  • I was gaining weight, so I have been doing many different types of exercises.

 

  • Everytime I exhasted and looked for another sports, I gained weight back.
  • Every time I would end up exhausted and looked for another sport, so I would end up gaining back the weight I had lost.

 

  • The same thing had happened again and again, until I totally gave up the perfect body.
  • The same thing had happened again and again, until I totally gave up the ideal perfect body.

 

  • Then, one day, someone recommended a swim.
  • Then, one day, someone recommended I try swimming.

 

  • Swim was not included in my sports' list always; I was too shy to wear a swimsuit.
  • Swimming was not included in my sports' list; I was too shy to wear a swimsuit.

 

  • (If I had known the water in a pool was acutally my shouder-high, I would have tried three years ago.)
  • (If I had known the water in a pool was actually shoulder-high, I would have tried three years ago.)

 

  • Anyway, I decied to give a try and now swimming is my favorite sports.
  • Anyway, I decided to try swimming and now is my favorite exercise.

 
Sound great, I love to swim also. Don't worry about all of the corrections I made. Most of them were to make your sentences sound more natural.
Oct 24th 2009 23:34 tony

  • Since I was getting weight, I have been done many kinds of exercises.
  • Since I was gaining weight, I have been doing many kinds of exercises. [Alternative: "getting heavy" is another phrase for "gaining weight".]

 

  • These are quite interesting and helpful for losing weight, but too hard for me to last for a long time.
  • These are quite interesting and helpful for losing weight, but too hard for me to last for a long time. [Alternative: "...too hard for me to keep doing for long."]

 

  • Everytime I exhasted and looked for another sports, I gained weight back.
  • Everytime I got exhausted and looked for other sports, I gained weight back.

 

  • The same thing had happened again and again, until I totally gave up the perfect body.
  • The same thing had happened again and again, until I totally gave up on having a perfect body.

 

  • Then, one day, someone recommended a swim.
  • Then, one day, someone recommended swimming.

 

  • Swim was not included in my sports' list always; I was too shy to wear a swimsuit.
  • Swimming was never included in my list of sports; I was too shy to wear a swimsuit.

 

  • (If I had known the water in a pool was acutally my shouder-high, I would have tried three years ago.)
  • (If I had known the water in a pool comes up to my shoulder, I would have tried three years ago.) [Alternative: "the water... is shoulder deep"]

 

  • Anyway, I decied to give a try and now swimming is my favorite sports.
  • Anyway, I decided to give it a try and now swimming is my favorite sport. ["it" refers to "swimming"; you can also say "one of my favorite sports", but if you like it better than any other sport, "my favorite sport" is correct]

 
Swimming is also the form of exercise I like best for keeping my weight under control (which I have not been doing so well recently :-( ). Unfortunately, winter is coming, and I don't have access to heated pools.
Oct 25th 2009 04:59 carsont

  • Everytime I exhasted and looked for another sports, I gained weight back.
  • Every time I got exhausted and looked for another sport (or: type of exercise), I gained weight back (or: regained the weight that I had lost).

 

  • The same thing had happened again and again, until I totally gave up the perfect body.
  • The same thing had happened again and again, until I totally gave up on having the perfect body.

 

  • (If I had known the water in a pool was acutally my shouder-high, I would have tried three years ago.)
  • (If I had known the water in a pool was actually my shoulder height (or: shoulder deep), I would have tried three years ago.)

 
Oct 25th 2009 23:13 aein/에인

Everyone corrected everything in your entry already so I will just leave a comment. ^^

I wish I was a good swimmer because swimming seems like the perfect exercise~! I just need practice I guess. ^^
Oct 25th 2009 23:17 Kari

  • Since I was getting weight, I have been done many kinds of exercises.
  • Since I've been gaining was getting weight, I have been doing many different types kinds of exercises.

 

  • Playing squash, badminton, tennis and table tennis, doing dance sports, going to a fitness club, hiking, and so on....
  • Playing squash, badminton, tennis and table tennis, doing dance sports, going to a fitness club, hiking, and so on....

 

  • These are quite interesting and helpful for losing weight, but too hard for me to last for a long time.
  • These are quite interesting and helpful ways for losing weight but, they're too hard for me to last do for a long time.

 

  • Everytime I exhasted and looked for another sports, I gained weight back.
  • Every time I became exhausted and went looking for another sports, I would gain the weight back.

 

  • The same thing had happened again and again, until I totally gave up the perfect body.
  • The same thing had happened again and again, until I totally gave up on having the perfect body.

 

  • Then, one day, someone recommended a swim.
  • Then, one day, someone recommended a swimming.

 

  • (If I had known the water in a pool was acutally my shouder-high, I would have tried three years ago.)
  • (If I had known the water in the a pool was actually my up to my shoulder's-high, I would have tried three years ago.)

 

  • Anyway, I decied to give a try and now swimming is my favorite sports.
  • Anyway, I decided to give it a try and now swimming is my favorite sports.

 

  • These days, I swim with fins.
  • These days, I swim with flippers fins.

 
They say swimming is the best way to lose weight! I love swimming ^_^
I'm glad you like it too. Just have fun, don't worry about losing weight ;)

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