Glad to join in this nice place!
May 26th 2008 00:54
Hello,my dear friends,I'm very happy to come here,I'm a newbie ,my english is very poor and I want to improve it ,i will be greatly appreciate your if your can help me .i am a chinese,also it's my pleasure to help those who want to learn chinese.i'm looking forward to making friends with you! thank you!
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Hello, my dear friends, I'm very happy to come here. I'm a newbie. My English is very poor and I want to improve it. I will be greatly appreciate your help if you can help me. I am Chinese, and also it's my pleasure to help those who want to learn Chinese. I'm looking forward to making friends with you!
As Kimi says, I think you should pay more attention to punctuation and space. Then your English will become easier to understand. Your English is really good, so you should think about your readers. :)
And... personally, I want you to capitalize the letters that are supposed to be capitalized, such as "I" or "Chinese". Then your English will look much more wonderful. :)