I make it!!

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As scheduled, I waited her at the front of the cafe near an acedemy with two cup of coffees. As I remember, she always used to pass by there. A little moments later, I saw her coming toward cafe. I naturally approached her, and handed a cup of coffee to her. She seemed to be surprised with my unexpected behavior. And then, I asked her if you gave me your phone number. She gave me her phone number with a little hasitation. I had a lucky dream last night, which seemed to work it out. I was so happy that I feel like I'm walking on air.


p.s. Please, help me. Is there somebody correcting my diary? n.n
Mar 25th 2010 18:29 akatsuka

  • I make it!!
  • I done it!!

 

  • As scheduled, I waited her at the front of the cafe near an acedemy with two cup of coffees.
  • As scheduled, I waited for her at the front of the cafe near the academy with two cups of coffees.(Notes: You can count cups, but not coffee. Also, it is a specific academy (you know which one), so we use 'the' not 'an')

 

  • As I remember, she always used to pass by there.
  • As I remember she always used to pass by here.

 

  • A little moments later, I saw her coming toward cafe.
  • A few moments later, I saw her coming towards the cafe.

 

  • I naturally approached her, and handed a cup of coffee to her.
  • I casually approached her, and handeda cup of coffee to her.

 

  • She seemed to be surprised with my unexpected behavior.
  • She seemed to be surprised by my unexpected behavior.

 

  • And then, I asked her if you gave me your phone number.
  • And then, I then asked her if she would give me her phone number.

 

  • She gave me her phone number with a little hasitation.
  • She gave me it with a little hesitation.

 

  • I had a lucky dream last night, which seemed to work it out.
  • I had a lucky dream last night, which seemed to work it out.

 

  • I was so happy that I feel like I'm walking on air.
  • I was so happy that I feel like I'm now walking on air.

 

  • Is there somebody correcting my diary?
  • Is there somebody who can correcting my diary?

 
Ooh! I wonder what tonights dream will hold? :)

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