My View on Opportunity.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 15 minutes to write a composition on topic My View on Opportunity.

Different people have different opportunity, But it is not everyone can seize their opportune moment.

Maybe you could have a host of opportunities, however you can't became aware of the opportunity was coming, so you can but lose.

As to me, I prefer to believe that everyone need hardworking rather than loaf on the job, if only do your best, I think you will have a host of opportunities.Previously, you need have enough ability, So eventually you will win.

Jan 11th 2010 22:13 dryplace

  • Directions: For this part, you are allowed 15 minutes to write a composition on topic My View on Opportunity.
  • Directions: For this part, you are given/allowed to have 15 minutes to write a composition on the topic "My View on Opportunity".

 

  • Different people have different opportunity, But it is not everyone can seize their opportune moment.
  • Different people have different opportunities, But it is not everyone can seize their opportune moment.

 

  • Maybe you could have a host of opportunities, however you can't became aware of the opportunity was coming, so you can but lose.
  • Maybe you could have a lot of opportunities, however you can't became aware of the opportunity was coming, so you can do nothing but lose.

 

  • As to me, I prefer to believe that everyone need hardworking rather than loaf on the job, if only do your best, I think you will have a host of opportunities.
  • As for me, I prefer to believe that everyone need hardworking rather than loaf on the job, if only do your best, I think you will have a host of opportunities.

 
Jan 11th 2010 22:21 Dennis Japanese

  • Different people have different opportunity, But it is not everyone can seize their opportune moment.
  • Different people have different opportunities, but it is not everyone can seize their opportune moments.

 

  • Maybe you could have a host of opportunities, however you can't became aware of the opportunity was coming, so you can but lose.
  • Maybe you could have a host of opportunities, however you can't be aware of the opportunity that is coming, so you can (can what?) but lose.

 

  • As to me, I prefer to believe that everyone need hardworking rather than loaf on the job, if only do your best, I think you will have a host of opportunities.
  • For me, I prefer to believe that everyone need to work hard rather than loafing on the job. I think you will have a host of opportunities only if you do your best.

 

  • Previously, you need have enough ability, So eventually you will win.
  • But first of all, you need to have enough ability so that eventually you can win.

 
Jan 12th 2010 03:21 ~Jala~ // ~ジャラ~

You were already well-corrected. Very well said!
Jan 12th 2010 09:40 Eniko

thanks guys !!!

>^^<

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