My View on Job-Hopping

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Jan 12th 2010 21:06

Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Job-Hopping. You should write at least 120 words.

　　 My View on Job-Hopping
Working is important for you and me. When we was leaving school, we should throw ourself into work actively.
Some people like a kind of work from beginning to end.Some people like that they can always change their work.For me, In my opinion When we are young, We can always change our work and has been accumulated bit by bit our experiences.To study different styles of different fireld and advance ourself gradations.At last we can learn much more than just always work in one place.
However when we are a little old, the best way is that we should be very thorough and be painstaking with in our work.Because we have enough experiences, so we can always in this position and no need to think that we should change work.
......(LaZy....Don't want to be continue...Plz allow me this mistake.LoL)

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Jan 13th 2010 15:26 medusamolly

English
Dutch , Japanese

When we was leaving school, we should throw ourself into work actively.
When we leave school, we should actively throw ourselves into work actively.

Some people like a kind of work from beginning to end.
Some people like the kind of job where you stay at one place from start to retirement.

Some people like that they can always change their work.
Some people like the flexibility to always change their job.

For me, In my opinion When we are young, We can always change our work and has been accumulated bit by bit our experiences.
I personally believe that when we are young, we can always change our job and bit by bit become accumulated to a work environment through our experiences.

To study different styles of different fireld and advance ourself gradations.
By changing jobs, we can study different styles in different fields and advance ourselves beyond our college graduations.

At last we can learn much more than just always work in one place.
At last, we can learn far more than if we just always work in one place.

However when we are a little old, the best way is that we should be very thorough and be painstaking with in our work.
However, when we are a little older, the best thing we can do is be very thorough and be painstaking at our job.

Because we have enough experiences, so we can always in this position and no need to think that we should change work.
This is because we have enough experiences, so we should have a comfort level and stability in this position and so there is no need to think about changing jobs.

You may have noticed that I changed "work" into "job" in most of your composition. This is because the topic is "job-hopping." Often "work" and "job" is interchangeable, but here in this composition, I would use "job" to mean "place of employment" and "work" to mean "type of tasks you do at your employment".

Cheers!

Jan 13th 2010 16:09 Eniko

Mandarin
English , Korean

Too many mistakes...thanks Chrisitina.

Jan 14th 2010 00:58 medusamolly

English
Dutch , Japanese

Many of the changes I made were more suggestions than critical mistakes.
That, and you said yourself that you were lazy. :p This is not your best work. So do not fret.

Jan 14th 2010 22:38 Eniko