Caution No matching entries found.

Can we prevent crimes?

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of danielbml's latest journal entries Jun 25th 2009 04:38

I tried to write an essay about this topic to my class and I hope you'll have patience to read and correct it. :)

“Nothing can be done to prevent crime”. Such statement seems too inflexible as it is. I’d say: “nothing can be done to prevent all crimes all the time.” It might sound a little pessimistic, but it’s true. We’ll always have to face grief, pain and desolation as a result of countless varieties of crimes caused by an inherent corruption into the mind of the mankind.
Unfortunately, we’re prone to make bad choices and reap undesirable outcomes. The difference is that most of us have some self-control, but in time of need human beings can change drastically their personality. That’s why we can’t prevent all crimes every time or build a perfect society: because we are still plain humans. But we can improve on an environment by providing a higher level of education and security. In doing so, there will be a decrease in the attempts of crimes, since a higher level of social development was properly provided.
The Third World is well-known by having a high level of poverty and all sorts of crimes. This is a consequence of bad governments that haven’t provided the least welfare throughout the centuries. However, Brazil has been doing some progress regarding crime prevention and social development, as the population has been pleading for changes lately.
In its turn, even in a decent society no lacking primary needs there will be another kind of crimes, apparently harmless and committed underground, such as: political corruption, bribery, money laundering, extortion, etc. The environment can change, but the mindset is still the same – with tendency to ambition, greed and selfishness. Therefore, we prevent crimes not by kitting ourselves out in brand-new high-tech weapons or an efficient secret service, but by creating a whole environment that allows a definite change in our mindsets.
Jun 25th 2009 04:59 Curl

  • Such statement seems too inflexible as it is.
  • Such a statement seems too inflexible as it is.

 

  • We’ll always have to face grief, pain and desolation as a result of countless varieties of crimes caused by an inherent corruption into the mind of the mankind.
  • We’ll always have to face grief, pain and desolation as a result of countless varieties of crimes caused by an inherent corruption into the mind of the mankind.

 

  • But we can improve on an environment by providing a higher level of education and security.
  • However, we can improve on an environment by providing a higher level of education and security.

 

  • In its turn, even in a decent society no lacking primary needs there will be another kind of crimes, apparently harmless and committed underground, such as: political corruption, bribery, money laundering, extortion, etc.
  • In its turn, even in a decent society, with no lacking primary needs, there will be another kind of crimes, apparently harmless and committed underground, such as: political corruption, bribery, money laundering, extortion, etc.

 

  • The environment can change, but the mindset is still the same – with tendency to ambition, greed and selfishness.
  • The environment can change, but the mindset is still the same – with the tendency towards ambition, greed and selfishness.

 

  • Therefore, we prevent crimes not by kitting ourselves out in brand-new high-tech weapons or an efficient secret service, but by creating a whole environment that allows a definite change in our mindsets.
  • Therefore, we prevent crimes not by kitting ourselves out in brand-new high-tech weapons, or an efficient secret service, but by creating a whole environment that allows a definite change in our mindsets.

 
Wow, that was beyond a good job. That paper would give you an "A" in America. This is a very interesting topic. I definitely get your point. It seems at solving crimes we have a tendency to be "reactive". We only get involved after a crime has been committed. As a society we should focus more on being "active". We must understand why people feel they must commit a crime and take a better role in helping the those in poverty find a way out.
Jun 25th 2009 05:01 Saraphyna

  • “Nothing can be done to prevent crime”.
  • “Nothing can be done to prevent crimes..

 

  • Such statement seems too inflexible as it is.
  • Such a statement seems too inflexible as it is.

 

  • I’d say: “nothing can be done to prevent all crimes all the time.” It might sound a little pessimistic, but it’s true.
  • I’d say: “Nothing can be done to prevent all crimes, all the time.” It might sound a little pessimistic, but it’s true.

 

  • We’ll always have to face grief, pain and desolation as a result of countless varieties of crimes caused by an inherent corruption into the mind of the mankind.
  • We’ll always have to face grief, pain, and desolation as a result of countless varieties of crimes caused by an inherent corruption into of the mind of the in mankind.

 

  • The difference is that most of us have some self-control, but in time of need human beings can change drastically their personality.
  • The difference is that most of us have some self-control, but in time of need human beings can change drastically their personality drastically.

 

  • That’s why we can’t prevent all crimes every time or build a perfect society: because we are still plain humans.
  • That’s why we can’t prevent all crimes every all the time, or build a perfect society: because we are still plain humans.

 

  • But we can improve on an environment by providing a higher level of education and security.
  • But However, we can improve on an environment by providing a higher level of education and security.

 

  • In doing so, there will be a decrease in the attempts of crimes, since a higher level of social development was properly provided.
  • In doing so, there will be a decrease in the attempts of crimes, since a higher level of social development was will be properly provided.

 

  • This is a consequence of bad governments that haven’t provided the least welfare throughout the centuries.
  • This is a consequence of bad governments that haven’t even provided the least welfare throughout the centuries.

 

  • However, Brazil has been doing some progress regarding crime prevention and social development, as the population has been pleading for changes lately.
  • However, Brazil has been doing making some progress regarding crime prevention and social development, as the population has been pleading for changes lately.

 

  • In its turn, even in a decent society no lacking primary needs there will be another kind of crimes, apparently harmless and committed underground, such as: political corruption, bribery, money laundering, extortion, etc.
  • In its turn, even in a decent society not lacking primary needs, there will be another kind of crimes, - apparently seemingly harmless and committed underground carried out secretly, such as: political corruption, bribery, money laundering, extortion, etc.

 

  • The environment can change, but the mindset is still the same – with tendency to ambition, greed and selfishness.
  • The environment can change, but the mindset is will still be the same – with tendency to ambition, greed, and selfishness.

 

  • Therefore, we prevent crimes not by kitting ourselves out in brand-new high-tech weapons or an efficient secret service, but by creating a whole environment that allows a definite change in our mindsets.
  • Therefore, we prevent crimes not by kidding ourselves out in with brand-new high-tech weapons or an efficient secret service, but by creating a whole environment that allows a definite change in our mindsets.

 
You're such a good writer! This essay is excellent!
danielbml
  • Portuguese(Brazil)
  • English

Journals Statistics

Latest entry

See more >>

Latest comments

See more >>

Entries by Month