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Fisrt essay couseling

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of SIYUN's latest journal entries Jan 17th 2010 19:38

Today, I took a first counseling about essay.
今日最初の最初のエッセイカウンセリングを受けた。

The counselor is told me some useful advise.
カウンセラーは有用なアドバイスをいくつかくれた。

However, I couldn't hear sometimes because of poor of my listening skill
でも、自分の貧弱なリスニングスキルでは、ところどころ何を行っているのか聞こえない所があった。

I assumed that situation preliminary, so I took countermeasure that I recorded during session.
この状況は事前に予想していたので、セッションを録音するという対策をしていた。

Of course I got a permission before starting the session.
勿論事前に許可を貰って。

I can hear again at home later, so this is OK.
あとで家で聞くことができるのでこれに関してはまぁOKだ。.

In addition, I felt that time is short.
それとば別に、時間がすごく短いと感じた。

I don't have a time until applying for my first school, therefore I had many questions.
最初の学校に出願するまでに時間が無いので、それ故にたくさんの質問をしたかった。

Anyway, I'm going to take the GMAT so I don't have the time to write my essay today.
とにかく、明日はGMATを受けるので、今日はエッセイを書いている暇などない。

What a crazy schedule!
なんて狂ったスケジュールなんだ！

Syunpei
Jan 18th 2010 09:04 bon
  • English
  • Japanese

  • Today, I took a first counseling about essay.
  • Today, I took a workshop on writing essays. (I think this is what you mean?)
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  • The counselor is told me some useful advise.
  • The counselor is told me some useful advice.
Comment  
  • However, I couldn't hear sometimes because of poor of my listening skill
  • However, I couldn't understand sometimes because of my poor listening skill.
Comment  
  • I assumed that situation preliminary, so I took countermeasure that I recorded during session.
  • I assumed that would happen, so I took countermeasure by recording the session.
Comment  
  • Of course I got a permission before starting the session.
  • Of course I got a permission before starting the session.
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  • I can hear again at home later, so this is OK.
  • I can listen to it again when I am home, so this is OK.
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  • In addition, I felt that time is short.
  • In addition, I felt that the time was short.
Comment  
  • I don't have a time until applying for my first school, therefore I had many questions.
  • I don't have a lot of time until I apply to my first school, therefore I had many questions.
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How exciting. What kind of schools are you applying to? Grad school? Good luck!
Jan 18th 2010 16:19 Bah_Dure
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  • Japanese, French

  • Fisrt essay couseling
  • First Essay Counseling
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  • Today, I took a first counseling about essay.
  • Today, I took a first counseling about essay. (または Today I joined my first writing workshop.)
Comment  
  • However, I couldn't hear sometimes because of poor of my listening skill
  • However, I couldn't hear what he was saying sometimes because of poor of my listening ability.
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  • I can hear again at home later, so this is OK.
  • I can listen to it again later at home, so I'm OK (または so I'm fine with how it turned out).
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  • In addition, I felt that time is short.
  • In addition, I felt that the session ended too soon.
Comment  
  • I don't have a time until applying for my first school, therefore I had many questions.
  • I don't have a time before I will apply for my first school, and so I had many questions.
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SIYUNさん、こんにちは

久しぶりですね。英語が大分上手になりました。また、GMATに頑張ってくださいね＾＾
(It's been a while. Your English as gotten a lot better. Also, good luck on the GMAT.)
Jan 21st 2010 18:38 SIYUN
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  • English

皆さん添削有難う！
完全に寝不足です。
Jan 22nd 2010 18:54 Scuba
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  • Japanese

  • However, I couldn't hear sometimes because of poor of my listening skill
  • Hearは「聞けます」と意味。Understandは「分かります」と意味。そこに「understand」のほうがいい。
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頑張って！
SIYUN
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