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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of SIYUN's latest journal entries Jan 31st 2010 16:01
Today, I watched a surprising news.

The news reported about Japan prime minister's remark.

He said (cited word from greatest leader, Mahatma Gandhi),

"Fortune without work is enormous guilt"

It's a good word itself.

But he is just that man.

His allowance from his mother is US$15M per month.

And he has a tremendous stacks, he can survive without work.

I don't wanna say that the rich is evil.

I really say him you should check your word yourself as least onetime.

I'm very glad and proud to hear that good reputation about Japan and I love Japan.

But many young Japanese people perplexed this situation.

Now this country get lost.

Someone tell me what you feel about it.


Jan 31st 2010 22:59

  • Today, I watched a surprising news.
  • Today, I watched the news and it wassurprising.
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  • The news reported about Japan prime minister's remark.
  • The news reported about Japan's prime minister's remark.
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  • "Fortune without work is enormous guilt"
  • "The Seven Deadly Sins are wealth without work, pleasure without conscience, knowledge without character, business without morality, science without humanity, worship without sacrifice and politics without principle. " (This is Gandhi's complete quote)
Comment  
  • It's a good word itself.
  • There's truth to those words.
Comment  
  • His allowance from his mother is US$15M per month.
  • His allowance from his mother was $15M USDper month.
Comment  
  • And he has a tremendous stacks, he can survive without work.
  • And he has a tremendous stacks, he can survive without work.(I don't know what you mean?)
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  • I don't wanna say that the rich is evil.
  • I don't wanna say that the being rich is evil.
Comment  
  • I really say him you should check your word yourself as least onetime.
  • I really say him you should check your word yourself as least onetime.(I don't know what you mean?)
Comment  
  • I'm very glad and proud to hear that good reputation about Japan and I love Japan.
  • I'm very glad and proud to hear that Japan has a good reputation about Japan and I love Japan.
Comment  
  • But many young Japanese people perplexed this situation.
  • But many young Japanese people areperplexed by this situation.
Comment  
  • Now this country get lost.
  • Now this country is lost.
Comment  
  • Someone tell me what you feel about it.
  • Tell me your thoughts and opinions on this matter?
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Fortune without work is enormous guilt-----------Is that all your Prime Minister said when quoting Gandhi?????? Here whenever a politician quotes anyone first of all they make sure the quote is complete and not just say a portion of it. Since it shows a lack of intelligence and it's rude to the person who created that quote!
Feb 02nd 2010 10:53 SIYUN
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＞Lorry 楼璃
Thank you for correcting.

I really want to say that
>He has a lot of stocks (shares) of many companies, so he can live a life without working himself.
>I really tell him that think twice before you speak any words.
Can you understand this expression?

I'm appreciate you teaching me a whole quote.

Syunpei
Feb 03rd 2010 03:37

He has a lot of stocks (shares) of many companies, so he can live a life without working himself.------------->This sentence is much better.

He has a lot of stocks to many companies, so he can live his life without working.-------->Only minor corrections.

I really tell him that think twice before you speak any words.

That expression here is:
Think twice before you speak.
Yes I know those words and sometimes wish I could follow them!!! :)
Feb 03rd 2010 09:52 Teo
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  • Japanese

  • What do you feel about this statement?
  • Howdo you feel about this statement? とか　　What do you think about this statement?
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  • Today, I watched a surprising news.
  • Today, I saw some surprising news.
Comment  
  • The news reported about Japan prime minister's remark.
  • There was a report about a remark made by Japan's prime minister.
Comment  
  • He said (cited word from greatest leader, Mahatma Gandhi),
  • He cited a quote from Mahatma Gandhi:
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  • "Fortune without work is enormous guilt"
  • "Wealth without work is a sin."
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  • It's a good word itself.
  • There's truth to those words.
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  • But he is just that man.
  • But he is a hypocrite to say that. hypccriteと言う事は偽善者と言う事です。
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  • His allowance from his mother is US$15M per month.
  • After all, his allowance from his mother was 15 million dollars per month.ところで、＄１５Ｍ　は￥1,357,050,513ですので、それはちょっと間違っているかなと思っています。.
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  • And he has a tremendous stacks, he can survive without work.
  • And, since he has plenty of money in stocks, he can easily survive without work.
Comment  
  • I don't wanna say that the rich is evil.
  • I don't want to say that being rich is evil.wannaと言う事は口語だけです。
Comment  
  • I really say him you should check your word yourself as least onetime.
  • But I would like to say to him, "Think before you speak."
Comment  
  • I'm very glad and proud to hear that good reputation about Japan and I love Japan.
  • I'm very glad and proud to hear that Japan has a good reputation, and I love Japan.
Comment  
  • But many young Japanese people perplexed this situation.
  • But many young Japanese people are perplexed by this situation.
Comment  
  • Now this country get lost.
  • This country has lost its way.
Comment  
  • Someone tell me what you feel about it.
  • Let me know what you think about it.
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政治家がそんな偽善の事を言うのはふだんだと思います。（笑）
Feb 03rd 2010 21:07 SIYUN
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>Teo

Thank you for your correction.
your correction is comprehensible.

I just want to say about US$150K not US$15M : )
(￥15.000.000)
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