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Your favorite things Hey sleepy-head! I feel the same way, when I am asked a vague question like that! The purpose is to get you to use your new language voca...
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Your favorite things あんまり英語が上手ではないので文書を直すことはできません。^^;でも私もいろんな料理とか色とか好きなものがたくさんあったので共通点があるんだと思ってなんとなくうれしくなりました。偏見なしでものを見ることは難しいからいいと思います。下手な日本湖ですみません。(__)~
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What do you feel about this... >Teo
Thank you for your correction.
your correction is comprehensible.
I just want to say about US$150K not US$15M : )
(¥15.00...
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What do you feel about this... He has a lot of stocks (shares) of many companies, so he can live a life without working himself.------------->This sentence is much b...
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What do you feel about this... >Lorry 楼璃
Thank you for correcting.
I really want to say that
>He has a lot of stocks (shares) of many companies, so he can liv...
Jan 31st 2010 22:59
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What do you feel about this... Fortune without work is enormous guilt-----------Is that all your Prime Minister said when quoting Gandhi?????? Here whenever a politici...
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Fisrt essay couseling SIYUNさん、こんにちは
久しぶりですね。英語が大分上手になりました。また、GMATに頑張ってくださいね^^
(It's been a while. Your English as gotten a lot better. Also, good luck on t...
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Fisrt essay couseling How exciting. What kind of schools are you applying to? Grad school? Good luck!
Jan 16th 2010 18:09
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I took TOEFL test today. Victorian Retro has a great idea that would be great to try! I'm sure you did better then you think you did!!!
Jan 16th 2010 16:11
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I took TOEFL test today. This test sounds difficult! I'm glad that you want to continue to improve. I wrote about how to study better in one of my recent entries:...
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A bad habit! >jesse, Lorry, Dimto
Thanks for your careful correction.
I learned a lot of thing from yours correction.
I heard first time a...
Jan 13th 2010 08:01
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A bad habit! It's not a bad thing to make quick decisions. I do it all the time depending on what it is.
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A bad habit! Good job! Your meaning was mostly clear. Most of my corrections were to make it sound more natural.
Make sure you use present tense w...
Jan 13th 2010 02:06
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school candidate "death march" sounds particularly grim.
Jan 05th 2010 07:32
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HAPPY NEW YEAR!! Happy New Year and I hope you achieve your goal!!!!
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Oops you can take your profile pic for skype from your webcam ^^
Dec 23rd 2009 00:42
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I finished my test. Good luck!!!! I bet you are relieved that the tests are over!
Dec 22nd 2009 23:21
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I finished my test. I hope that what you gain is worth the work you have put in. There are few things more sad than the regret of a lost youth.
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I finished my test. Siyun,
You wrote really nicely. I feel happy for you that you accomplished the challenge of completing all the exams you had to take....
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I was encouraged by TOEFL L... It's great to be able to take mistakes and criticism as help as opposed to frustrations. Keep at it, you'll get better.
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TOEFL practice Very good. You should work on your grammar, as a lot of problems are with plural words and sentence structure. Interesting topic.
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Someone teach me In your first example, you can use either phrase if you're choosing an item to buy for example. But there is also a slight difference in...
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GMAT TASK (Analysis of an I... Hi,
Your essay is quite good.
I am really sorry if some of my corrections are not
accurate in conveying what you wanted to say.
I ...
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review I think this is a good idea. I keep a paper diary that I rewrite the corrected Lang-8 entries into. I feel like if I write it on paper it...
Dec 12th 2009 01:35
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Mistake !! Fried rice isn't about presentation =p
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Speaking practice for the f... Good job in furthering your knowledge of the english language. By the way, can I maybe get a link for this?
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Speaking Practice For listening, just leave some English videos or tv on in the background while you do other things. So you can listen while you cook din...
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Faborite Book SIYUNさん、こんにちは
百科事典はとても便利な本ですね。それも、TOEFLの試験に頑張ってくださいね。:)
(Encyclopedias are very useful books, aren't they? Also, good luck on the TOE...
Nov 06th 2009 23:16
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Faborite Book I miss the days when there was enough time to just sit down and skim through the encyclopedia.
Hey sleepy-head! I feel the same way, when I am asked a vague question like that! The purpose is to get you to use your new language voca...
コメントありがとう! おせっかいかもだけど、日本”語”だよ~。
あんまり英語が上手ではないので文書を直すことはできません。^^;でも私もいろんな料理とか色とか好きなものがたくさんあったので共通点があるんだと思ってなんとなくうれしくなりました。偏見なしでものを見ることは難しいからいいと思います。下手な日本湖ですみません。(__)~
>Teo Thank you for your assistance and helpful information!
>Teo Thank you for your correction. your correction is comprehensible. I just want to say about US$150K not US$15M : ) (¥15.00...
政治家がそんな偽善の事を言うのはふだんだと思います。(笑)
He has a lot of stocks (shares) of many companies, so he can live a life without working himself.------------->This sentence is much b...
>Lorry 楼璃 Thank you for correcting. I really want to say that >He has a lot of stocks (shares) of many companies, so he can liv...
Fortune without work is enormous guilt-----------Is that all your Prime Minister said when quoting Gandhi?????? Here whenever a politici...
頑張って!
皆さん添削有難う! 完全に寝不足です。
SIYUNさん、こんにちは 久しぶりですね。英語が大分上手になりました。また、GMATに頑張ってくださいね^^ (It's been a while. Your English as gotten a lot better. Also, good luck on t...
How exciting. What kind of schools are you applying to? Grad school? Good luck!
Victorian Retro has a great idea that would be great to try! I'm sure you did better then you think you did!!!
This test sounds difficult! I'm glad that you want to continue to improve. I wrote about how to study better in one of my recent entries:...
Good luck! You can do it! ^^
頑張れ!
>jesse, Lorry, Dimto Thanks for your careful correction. I learned a lot of thing from yours correction. I heard first time a...
It's not a bad thing to make quick decisions. I do it all the time depending on what it is.
Good job! Your meaning was mostly clear. Most of my corrections were to make it sound more natural. Make sure you use present tense w...
"death march" sounds particularly grim.
Happy New Year and I hope you achieve your goal!!!!
you can take your profile pic for skype from your webcam ^^
Good luck!!!! I bet you are relieved that the tests are over!
I hope that what you gain is worth the work you have put in. There are few things more sad than the regret of a lost youth.
Syunpei Hello! Thank you for sharing those encouraging words. You are doing well! Suchu
Siyun, You wrote really nicely. I feel happy for you that you accomplished the challenge of completing all the exams you had to take....
that's very true! it makes a huge difference to the working environment
It's great to be able to take mistakes and criticism as help as opposed to frustrations. Keep at it, you'll get better.
Very good. You should work on your grammar, as a lot of problems are with plural words and sentence structure. Interesting topic.
Everyone, "Thank" you!! It's very coherent and convincing! Syunpei
"I'll take this one"と"I'd like to get this one"は同じような意味ですけど、"I'll take this one"は「これにします」っぽい意味で、"I'd l...
I hope my explanations are clear enough for you to understand. You make a very valid point!
In your first example, you can use either phrase if you're choosing an item to buy for example. But there is also a slight difference in...
Yeah. Try harder. :)
Hi, Your essay is quite good. I am really sorry if some of my corrections are not accurate in conveying what you wanted to say. I ...
Keeping a paper is good idea! copy that!!
I think this is a good idea. I keep a paper diary that I rewrite the corrected Lang-8 entries into. I feel like if I write it on paper it...
Fried rice isn't about presentation =p
Thats great!!! Keep on trying!!!
Good job in furthering your knowledge of the english language. By the way, can I maybe get a link for this?
>phauna Thanks for advice. I will try to do it from now on!
For listening, just leave some English videos or tv on in the background while you do other things. So you can listen while you cook din...
勉強頑張ってください!外国語を勉強するのは難しいですよね。いつでもSkypeで絡んでください。
SIYUNさん、こんにちは 百科事典はとても便利な本ですね。それも、TOEFLの試験に頑張ってくださいね。:) (Encyclopedias are very useful books, aren't they? Also, good luck on the TOE...
I miss the days when there was enough time to just sit down and skim through the encyclopedia.
Keep up the good work
Things happen don't worry!!! When is your Toefl exam? I think you will do just fine!
Happy belated birthday! I hope you throughly enjoyed yourself!
Happy Birthday! :)