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I want to use computer!!!

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I'm in the school. Now it's PE so I want to write something! I'm a girl who like make friends very much and I like football just watch! But in my school boys like play basketball in PE. I often knocked by the basketball so I prefer stay in the classroom!^_^ I use my mobile get on the Internet but I just could use it to keep dairy. I can't use it to help others to correct their mistakes about Chinese! I need a computer!!
Jun 03rd 2009 18:02 Will

  • I'm a girl who like make friends very much and I like football just watch!
  • I'm a girl who really likes to make friends very much and I like football, but just watching it!
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  • But in my school boys like play basketball in PE.
  • But in my school boys like to play basketball in PE.
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  • I often knocked by the basketball so I prefer stay in the classroom!^_^ I use my mobile get on the Internet but I just could use it to keep dairy.
  • I often get knocked by the basketball so I prefer stay in the classroom!^_^ I using my mobile to get on the Internet but I just could use it to keep dairy.
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  • I can't use it to help others to correct their mistakes about Chinese!
  • I can't use it to help others to correct their mistakes about Chinese!
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great!
Jun 03rd 2009 18:14 Annabell

Thank you very much!PS: i use my Mobile Phone get on the Internet. Not Mobile :-P!
Jun 03rd 2009 21:33 Tealeaf

  • I want to use computer!!!
  • I want to use a computer!!!
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  • I'm in the school.
  • I'm in the school.
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  • I'm a girl who like make friends very much and I like football just watch!
  • I'm a girl who likes very much to make friends, very much and I just like to watch football just watch! (You might say this: "I'm a girl who really likes to make friends, and I just like to watch football.")
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  • But in my school boys like play basketball in PE.
  • But in my school boys like to play basketball in PE.
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  • I often knocked by the basketball so I prefer stay in the classroom!^_^ I use my mobile get on the Internet but I just could use it to keep dairy.
  • I often get knocked by the basketball, so I prefer to stay in the classroom! ^_^ I am using my mobile to get on the Internet, but I just could just use it to keep my dairy diary.
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  • I can't use it to help others to correct their mistakes about Chinese!
  • I can't use it to help others to correct their mistakes about Chinese! (This is perfect.)
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Very good!

You need to be careful with articles (like "the" and "a"), because they're not something that you see in Chinese. :)

你现在得打足球!:P
Jun 03rd 2009 21:34 Tealeaf

(You can say "mobile" to mean "mobile phone".)
Jun 03rd 2009 23:05 Annabell

Thank you Tealeaf! PS: 踢足球 打篮球 ^_^
Annabell
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