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Today is a fineday! Now in WuHan China the wether is so hot! But in the moring it is very comfortable! The day after I will have a 3 days holiday. Because the grade12 students will have their final exam! That is the most important exam for a student! I hope they could get a good result!
Jun 04th 2009 09:31 madao

  • Today is a fineday!
  • Today is a fine day!
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  • Now in WuHan China the wether is so hot!
  • Now in WuHan China the wether is so hot! Currently, the weather in WuHan China is very hot. (suggestion)
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  • But in the moring it is very comfortable!
  • But in the morning it is very comfortable! But, it is very comfortable in the morning. (suggestion)
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  • The day after I will have a 3 days holiday.
  • The day after I will have a 3 days holiday.
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  • Because the grade12 students will have their final exam!
  • Bbecause the grade12 students will have their final exam!combine with previous sentence
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  • I hope they could get a good result!
  • I hope they could get a good result! I hope they do well.
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Jun 04th 2009 09:33

  • Today is a fineday!
  • Today is a fine day!
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  • Now in WuHan China the wether is so hot!
  • Now the weather is so hot at WuHan in China !
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  • But in the moring it is very comfortable!
  • But in the morning it is very comfortable!
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  • The day after I will have a 3 days holiday.
  • Tomorrow I will be having a three-day holiday.
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  • Because the grade12 students will have their final exam!
  • Because the 12th grade students will have their final exam!
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  • I hope they could get a good result!
  • I hope they/we(?) can/will get a good result!
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I also had my final exams, but it ended yesterday! :p I only need to return to school to get my certificate :D.
Jun 04th 2009 09:45 Ryan the Wired

  • Today is a fineday!
  • Today is a fineday fine day!
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  • Now in WuHan China the wether is so hot!
  • Now in WuHan, China, the wether is so hot!
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  • But in the moring it is very comfortable!
  • But in the moring morning it is very comfortable!
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  • The day after I will have a 3 days holiday.
  • The day after today, I will have a 3 days day holiday.
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  • Because the grade12 students will have their final exam!
  • Because the grade12 grade 12 students will have their final exam!
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  • I hope they could get a good result!
  • I hope they could can get a good result!
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Overall, very good. There are only a few simple errors.
1. The space between words.
2. Using commas when talking about city and country.
3. A spelling error.
4. The word "could" is typically used for past tense. using "can" sounds more natural.
http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/verbs-modals_can.htm


Enjoy your days off, but remember you will have to take that exam too.
Jun 04th 2009 10:11 Annabell

Thank you! I think my English will be better!
Jun 04th 2009 17:26 Tealeaf

  • Now in WuHan China the wether is so hot!
  • Now in WuHan China the wether is so hot! It's so hot at the moment in Wuhan, China! or The weather is so hot at the moment in Wuhan, China!
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  • But in the moring it is very comfortable!
  • But iIn the morning it is very nice, though!
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  • The day after I will have a 3 days holiday.
  • The day after I will have a 3 days holiday. I have three days holiday starting tomorrow.
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  • Because the grade12 students will have their final exam!
  • Because the grade12 students will have are having their final exam! (Combine this with the previous sentence.)
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  • I hope they could get a good result!
  • I hope that they could get a good result!
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Because you write well, I've corrected some sentences to read like "natural" English.

Try not to start a sentence with "But". If you want to do that, maybe combine it with the previous sentence: "The weather is very hot at the moment, but in the morning it is nice."

The same is true for "Because": "I will have three days holiday starting tomorrow, because the 12th Grade students are having their final exam."

I changed "will have" to "are having". This is more complicated, but I will try to explain. We often use the "present continuous" tense rather than the future tense to talk about planned events. So we say: "Tomorrow I am going to the theatre" and not "Tomorrow I will go to the theatre."

The simple future tense: "I will go to the theatre." is used to emphasise the fact. Perhaps it is like using 就 in Chinese? If your parents try to stop you going to the theatre, you might say "I will go to the theatre." to argue with them!

I hope that you understand me!

Enjoy your holiday. :)
Jun 04th 2009 18:37 Annabell

Oh! I see! I will remember ^_^
Annabell
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