Added or adding?(Business)

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Today, the customer released the order to us to add another 1K pcs. Orginial qty of the order is 5K pcs, now they increased it to 6k pcs. So I need to revise the quote. What I typed is as following, pls correct it.

" Would you please find the attached quote added another 1K to original quote?"
Feb 04th 2012 15:38 KillerDucky

  • Today, the customer released the order to us to add another 1K pcs.
  • Today, the customer released the order to us to add another 1K pcs.

 

  • Orginial qty of the order is 5K pcs, now they increased it to 6k pcs.
  • Original qty of the order was 5K pcs, now they increased it to 6k pcs.

 

  • What I typed is as following, pls correct it.
  • What I typed is as follows, pls correct it.

 

  • " Would you please find the attached quote added another 1K to original quote?"
  • " Would you please find the attached quote adding another 1K to the original quote?"

 
The attached quote represents part of the process of adding to the original quote. So the action of adding is in progress. That's why it should be present progressive (-ing form).

Also you don't need "another". The adding part already takes care of that. Example for "another": They revise a 2nd time, and add another 1K to bring it to 7K total. So now this is the second addition, so it's "adding another 1K".

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