I'd like to write a letter!
Jun 03rd 2009 22:11
help
English is so important for me !
So I should practice more and more.
today ,the weather is really very nice,although it was rainy yestoday .
I am happy every time, but when I came back to home by bus,I felt
a little uncomfortable.And I don't know why.
Perhaps I stay at the bus too long time!!!
So I should practice more and more.
today ,the weather is really very nice,although it was rainy yestoday .
I am happy every time, but when I came back to home by bus,I felt
a little uncomfortable.And I don't know why.
Perhaps I stay at the bus too long time!!!
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One tip is this: if you feel like starting a sentence with "but" or "and" then try putting a comma between and making it one sentence.
For example:
"When I came home by bus I felt a little uncomfortable. And I don't know why."
becomes:
"When I came home by bus I felt a little uncomfortable, and I don't know why."