Jun 06th 2009 10:59 夏·夜風 commented on show my talent！
thank you !!!

Jun 06th 2009 04:53 Rhyski commented on show my talent！
Kari corrected everything perfectly, so there is nothing more I can correct^^ As he said, 日记 = diary. But, you can also say "journa...

Jun 05th 2009 23:16 made 5 corrections for show my talent！
Aw, that happens to me all the time. Where I would regret not joining T_T

Jun 03rd 2009 22:45 Tealeaf made 5 corrections for I'd like to write a letter!
Well done. You should try to keep your sentences together. One tip is this: if you feel like starting a sentence with "but" ...

Jun 02nd 2009 21:45 花鳥風月 made 6 corrections for Help me please!
Good luck !!

Jun 02nd 2009 21:42 SammyB made 6 corrections for Help me please!
It would be better if you joined a few of your sentences together. eg. "I really like English, but my English is terrible." ...