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I woke up noon and studied English with abc and cnn news.
I went to the fitness club and worked out about 1hour and half.
After having dinner, I watched the m net show.
Because I recently became to love singer called '2PM.'
They are idol group who perform acrobatic and powerful dances.
Thes have a lot of fans who like 2PM's funny shows and unique character. Most of all, fans love their straight manner when cameras on or off.
I actually didn't know about myself why I became to like them even after I grown up. I'm 26 years old!!
To that point, they're so casual, free and attractive.
2 of them are from America.
They are so fluent to speak English, so to speak, they're Korean-American. I hope to understand their conversation or whispers.
I lately have passion to learn English more then before. hahahah!
I attatched a file about one of them who is Taek I love most. keke.

Anyway, I got a new project which research, inerview and translate about Schools Without Borders(SWB).
It is community which gather youth who is able to be discriminated by race, skin color or else.
They have projects centered culture like graffity, hip-hop dance and movie making all over the world.
They have view of education.
I don't know pretty much about them so far.
If I study more about them, I will introduce them to you.



I decided to read a bpok 'The catcher in the rye.'
Have you guys ever read this book before?
I have never read a book thouroughout.

Aug 29th 2009 04:18 Aaleen

  • I woke up noon and studied English with abc and cnn news.
  • I woke up at noon and studied English with abc and cnn news. Whenever you are about to tell a time you will mostly use "at" before the time.

 

  • I went to the fitness club and worked out about 1hour and half.
  • I went to the fitness club and worked out for about 1 hour and half. You can omit the "for" but it sounds better if you use it.

 

  • Because I recently became to love singer called '2PM.'
  • Because I recently became to love a singer called '2PM.'

 

  • They are idol group who perform acrobatic and powerful dances.
  • They are an idol group who perform acrobatic and powerful dances.

 

  • Thes have a lot of fans who like 2PM's funny shows and unique character.
  • They have a lot of fans who like 2PM's funny shows and unique character.

 

  • Most of all, fans love their straight manner when cameras on or off.
  • Most of all, fans love their straight manner when the cameras on or off. You can omit "the", I suggest you use it, it will help you sounds more intelligent.

 

  • I actually didn't know about myself why I became to like them even after I grown up.
  • I actually didn't know about myself why I became to like them even after I have grown up.

 

  • They are so fluent to speak English, so to speak, they're Korean-American.
  • They are so fluent in speaking English, so to speak, they're Korean-American.

 

  • I lately have passion to learn English more then before.
  • I lately have the passion to learn English more than before. small common mistake, even by foreigners =) "than" is used to compare.

 

  • Anyway, I got a new project which research, inerview and translate about Schools Without Borders(SWB).
  • Anyway, I got a new project which research, inerview and translate for Schools Without Borders(SWB).

 

  • It is community which gather youth who is able to be discriminated by race, skin color or else.
  • It is a community which gather youth who are able to be discriminated by race, skin color or else. "are" replaces "is" when the subject in the sentence is plural.

 

  • They have view of education.
  • They have a view of education.

 

  • I don't know pretty much about them so far.
  • I don't know pretty much about them so far. hmm "pretty much" in this sentence doesn't sound good, sorry >.<

 
The catcher in the rye, I've heard of that book, I think some English classes in my school read this book last year.

Here are some examples for using at:

"I went to sleep at 10:30"
"I went to the party at 5:00"

however when you use terms such as "midnight, and night" to describe the time you will use "in"

"I went to sleep in the evening"
"I went to the party in the afternoon"

Keep it up ^^ I'd like to hear more from you later.
Aug 31st 2009 04:57 ~Jala~ // ~ジャラ~

  • They have projects centered culture like graffity, hip-hop dance and movie making all over the world.
  • They have culture-centered projects centered culture like graffiti, hip-hop dance and movie making all over the world.

 

  • I decided to read a bpok 'The catcher in the rye.'
  • I decided to read a book called, "The Catcher in the Rye."

 

  • I have never read a book thouroughout.
  • I have never finished reading a book. thouroughout.

 
Please tell us about SWB! ^_^ It sounds good.

You were already corrected pretty well, so I just had a few more suggestions.

I have not read the book that you mention, but because I like classic literature I will read it one day. ^_^ I generally am reading at least 3 books at a time on various subjects...

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