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This is assignment of my acquaintance.
Please check it out. ^^


Let me introduce myself.
My name is Lee, Bo-ram.
I'm in the third grades in the Sang-ha middle school.
My hobby is playing the piano.
I often play and song the hymn at home.
I live in Sang-ha where is so small town.
My neighborhood treat each other so good.

I want to be a dentist.
Because not only I but also my family have weak teeth.
So, I want to cure my family's teeth and let them eat every tasty foods.

I'd like to introduce my family to you.
My family consists of father, mother, younger broher and me.
My mother name is Kim, Mi-suk who is a social educationer.
She play the piano very good.
My father is Lee, Ei-jin who is a banking businessman.
My younger brother is Lee, Su-bum who is fifth grades in elementary school.

My best friend name is Lee, Hyun-kyung.
She can manage everything.
For example, when I forgot my stuffs, she always bring my things.
She likes to play with children.
So, She wants to be a kindergarten teacher.

My school is smaller than any others.
Because it is located in small town.
So teachers and students are familiar.
Teachers are so smart and kind.
They are so generous to pass our jokes.
Therefore, I'm proud of our teachers.
School flower is _______ , school bird is ______ , school tree is ________ .

I respect Ban, Ki-moon who is a Secretary General of U.N. and Schweitzer.(슈바이처)
I have ever watched the show about Mr.Ban.
He was given birth and raised in small country and broke difficult things.
He is an example to me.
And I also respect Schweitzer.
He was, as you know, a doctor.
But he turned down the every honor and money and went to the Africa.
And he cure the African who lacks of medication.
Both of them touched me so much.

There are something to boast about my hometown, Ko-chang where I live in.
First of all, There is Pansoree which is Korean traditional song.
Shin, Jae-hyo who is rearrange the five chapters is from Ko-chang.
Second, there are 고인돌, 모양성 and so on.
Koindol is a universal culture heritage which is appointed by UNESCO. (United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization)
Besides, Ko-chang is famous for foods.
There are 복분자, watermelon, 풍천-eel, hot pepper and so on.
When I went to Seoul, seeing the advertisement for the special product, I was so proud of that.

Apr 27th 2010 12:03 anderyoung

  • I'm in the third grades in the Sang-ha middle school.
  • I'm in the third grade of Sang-ha middle school.

 

  • I often play and song the hymn at home.
  • I often play and sing the hymns at home.

 

  • I live in Sang-ha where is so small town.
  • I live in Sang-ha where is so small town. the town is small.

 

  • My neighborhood treat each other so good.
  • In my neighborhood, we treat each other well.

 

  • Because not only I but also my family have weak teeth.
  • I want to be a dentist, because my family and I have weak teeth.

 

  • So, I want to cure my family's teeth and let them eat every tasty foods.
  • So, I want to cure my family's teeth and let them eat every all kinds of tasty foods.

 

  • My family consists of father, mother, younger broher and me.
  • My family consists of my father, mother, younger brother and me.

 

  • My mother name is Kim, Mi-suk who is a social educationer.
  • My mother name is Kim, Mi-suk who is a social educationer teacher.

 

  • She play the piano very good.
  • She plays the piano very good well.

 

  • My younger brother is Lee, Su-bum who is fifth grades in elementary school.
  • My younger brother is Lee, Su-bum who is in the fifth grades in elementary school.

 

  • For example, when I forgot my stuffs, she always bring my things.
  • For example, when I forget my stuff, she always bring my things.

 

  • I have ever watched the show about Mr.
  • I have ever watched the show about Mr.

 

  • He was given birth and raised in small country and broke difficult things.
  • He was given birth born and raised in small country and broke(i am not sure how she is using broke?) difficult things.

 

  • He is an example to me.
  • He is an example a role model to me.

 

  • And he cure the African who lacks of medication.
  • And he cured the African people who lacks of medication.

 

  • Shin, Jae-hyo who is rearrange the five chapters is from Ko-chang.
  • Shin, Jae-hyo who is rearranged the five chapters is from Ko-chang.

 
phew, I am glad I got to finish this. I hope your friend does well with this paper. 이현경 sounds like a good friend. I hope they stay friends for a very long time!
Apr 27th 2010 13:11 ~Jala~ // ~ジャラ~

  • This is assignment of my acquaintance.
  • This is an assignment of my acquaintance.

 

  • I live in Sang-ha where is so small town.
  • I live in a small town called Sang-ha.

 

  • My younger brother is Lee, Su-bum who is fifth grades in elementary school.
  • My younger brother is Lee, Su-bum who is in fifth grade in elementary school.

 

  • My best friend name is Lee, Hyun-kyung.
  • My best friend's name is Lee, Hyun-kyung.

 

  • She can manage everything.
  • She can manage anything.

 

  • So, She wants to be a kindergarten teacher.
  • So, she wants to be a kindergarten teacher.

 

  • My school is smaller than any others.
  • My school is smaller than all others.

 

  • Because it is located in small town.
  • Because it is located in a small town.

 

  • So teachers and students are familiar.
  • So the teachers and students are close.

 

  • Teachers are so smart and kind.
  • The teachers are so smart and kind.

 

  • They are so generous to pass our jokes.
  • They are so generous and make jokes.

 

  • School flower is _______ , school bird is ______ , school tree is ________ .
  • Our school flower is _______ , our school bird is ______ , and our school tree is ________ .

 

  • I respect Ban, Ki-moon who is a Secretary General of U.
  • I respect Ban, Ki-moon who is a Secretary General of the U.

 

  • I have ever watched the show about Mr.
  • I have ever watched ashow about Mr.

 

  • He was given birth and raised in small country and broke difficult things.
  • He was born and raised in a small country and solved difficult problems.

 

  • But he turned down the every honor and money and went to the Africa.
  • But he turned down all honor and money and went to the Africa.

 

  • And he cure the African who lacks of medication.
  • And he cured the African who lacked medication.

 

  • There are something to boast about my hometown, Ko-chang where I live in.
  • There are some things to boast about my hometown, Ko-chang where I live.

 

  • First of all, There is Pansoree which is Korean traditional song.
  • First of all, there is Pansoree which is a traditional Korean song.

 

  • Besides, Ko-chang is famous for foods.
  • Besides those things, Ko-chang is also famous for its cuisine.

 

  • There are 복분자, watermelon, 풍천-eel, hot pepper and so on.
  • Such as 복분자, watermelons, 풍천-eel, hot peppers and so on.

 

  • When I went to Seoul, seeing the advertisement for the special product, I was so proud of that.
  • When I went to Seoul, seeing advertisements for our special exports, I was so proud (of that).

 
Apr 27th 2010 16:47 shiny

anderyoung and Jala// thank you so much. My friend will happy with this paper. thank you again for your sincerity. :)

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