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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of jjong's latest journal entries Nov 02nd 2009 12:25
Sometimes, no.. quite often, I can't understand people who make themselves depress. In my opinion,they never think about others feeling They only think about theirs hurt, theirs feeling, theirs hardship.
Even though they make somebody who is hearing theirs dissatisfaction, beefs, whine feel like... shit.
I think they very believe they are only victim of this unfair situation or believe that they never effect to anything of this result.
A few years ago, I thought I could see, understand, and agree to them cuz it looks so difficult for them to admit to their faults and the truth that they belong to the mistakes which make they feel sad. And probably, sometimes I did also. But it's too childish. It's nothing occur without themselves even though it seems like unfair for them everyting they blame is come from them.
It's pointless...
Nov 04th 2009 21:36 jjmountain
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  • Korean, Japanese

  • quite often, I can't understand people who make themselves depress.
  • quite often, I can't understand people who make themselves depress. depressed.
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  • In my opinion,they never think about others feeling They only think about theirs hurt, theirs feeling, theirs hardship.
  • In my opinion, [add a space] they never think about others feeling [period] They only think about their hurt, their feelings, and their hardships.
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  • Even though they make somebody who is hearing theirs dissatisfaction, beefs, whine feel like...
  • They can even make somebody who is listeneing to their dissatisfactions and their whining feel like shit. [beef? This is slang for 'compaint' is British English, but it's not good to use when writing]
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  • I think they very believe they are only victim of this unfair situation or believe that they never effect to anything of this result.
  • I think they really believe they are the only victim of an unfair situation or believe that they can never have an effect on anything to make a result.
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  • A few years ago, I thought I could see, understand, and agree to them cuz it looks so difficult for them to admit to their faults and the truth that they belong to the mistakes which make they feel sad.
  • A few years ago, I thought I could see, understand, and agree with them cuz it looks so difficult for them to admit to their faults and the truth is that they are responsible for the mistakes which make them feel sad.[This paragraph is very good ^^ it's a difficult subject to write about. Just so you know, writing 'cuz' is not good English, so please never write it on anything except your own blog - and even then I would urge you not to because it doesn't look clever to English speakers]
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  • And probably, sometimes I did also.
  • And probably, sometimes I did also. [What did you also do? This sentence is too small and confusing]
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  • But it's too childish.
  • But it's too childish. [뭐가를 너무 유치하냐고요? Again, in English you need to keep the reader informed of the subject you are talking about. If I read this sentence I know it would be ok in Korean, but in English it's problematic]
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  • It's nothing occur without themselves even though it seems like unfair for them everyting they blame is come from them.
  • It's nothing occur without themselves even though it seems like unfair for them all their complaints come from them. [This sentence confused me, I still don't understand what you mean but I have fixed the grammar of it]
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Well done! This is a very difficult subject to talk about, I couldn't imagine doing so as well as you have done in Korean 8-)

Please pay attention to the comments I have made in blue and try to remember to always specify the subject your sentences as much as possible.

:-)
Nov 05th 2009 12:18 jjong
  • Korean
  • English, English

Oh! Thank you very much for your correction.
It was very useful to me.
As you said, sometimes I don't write enough information about what I saying..


And probably, sometimes I did also

that means sometimes I also made myself despressed then blame someone else.

and It's not my mean that I use slang to look unpolite.. sorry.
Are you studying Korean ???
jjong
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  • English, English

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