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Time Management @ KLC

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Cathy's latest journal entries Jun 16th 2008 22:57
I attended a seminar of 'Time Management' last tuesday. It was about arranging schedule so doing important things at first by using 'Franklin Planner'. There are some laws to write the planner. I should write down what I have to do and what I've done and check the progresses of things. It may take some times doing like that, but I think it will be very useful and effective if I follow the planner's processes. It is very innvative methods of my life !
Jun 17th 2008 00:22 furrykef

  • I attended a seminar of 'Time Management' last tuesday.
  • I attended a seminar of 'Time Management' last Tuesday.
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  • It was about arranging schedule so doing important things at first by using 'Franklin Planner'.
  • It was about arranging a schedule to do important things at first by using a 'Franklin Planner'.
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  • There are some laws to write the planner.
  • Using the planner involves a few rules.
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  • I should write down what I have to do and what I've done and check the progresses of things.
  • I should write down what I have to do and what I've done and check the progress of things.
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  • It may take some times doing like that, but I think it will be very useful and effective if I follow the planner's processes.
  • It may take some time to do that, but I think it will be very useful and effective if I follow the planner's instructions.
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  • It is very innvative methods of my life !
  • It is one of the most innovative methods I've found!
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Hi, I was browsing the list of recently created entries and I just decided I'd correct this one. :)

I completely rewrote your sentence "There are some laws to write the planner" to sound more natural to me. But it would also be possible to say, "There are some rules about using the planner."

"Instructions"; does not mean the same thing as "processes", but this phrasing sounds more natural to me. "Instructions" refers specifically to the text that describes the process rather than the process itself. That is, it refers to the text that tells you how to use the planner. If you want a more literal rephrasing, I might say, "but I think it will be very useful and effective if I follow this planning process."

I have to admit I did not quite understand your last sentence, so I had to guess what it meant.

By the way, I see you're a native speaker of Korean... I wish I had time to learn Korean. My aunt is from Korea and speaks it natively. I think the language is very interesting... Hangul is an intriguing writing system, and the grammar is very similar to Japanese, another language I find interesting.

- Kef
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