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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Hiromi's latest journal entries Jun 08th 2009 02:06
Probably native English speaker fells my English like a kid.

I use many "I" When I write English.
I don't know how to connect the sentence in English.

I think some complicated things in my brain by Japanese.
Also I can think its by Chinese, and can express its by both languages.

But I really don't know how to express by English.
Perhaps I must get used to express by English.

My roommate is very cute girl. She is quite clever.
She could speak Chinese well soon. And we talk by Chinese everyday.
I lost a chance for studying English.
(she can speak English very well, also can speak French and hers mother tongue Bosnian)

I love my roommate very much. But She will go her home this summer.
I hope new roommate can not speak Chinese at all and can speak English well.
Jun 08th 2009 02:11 Gavin

  • Perhaps I must get used to express by English.
  • Perhaps I must get used to expressing by English.
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  • My roommate is very cute girl.
  • My roommate is a very cute girl.
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  • And we talk by Chinese everyday.
  • And we talk by Chinese everyday.
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  • I lost a chance for studying English.
  • I lost my chance for studying English.
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  • (she can speak English very well, also can speak French and hers mother tongue Bosnian)
  • (she can speak English very well, also, she can speak French, and hers mother's tongue, which is Bosnian)
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  • But She will go her home this summer.
  • But She will go to her home this summer.
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  • I hope new roommate can not speak Chinese at all and can speak English well.
  • I hope my new roommate can not speak Chinese at all, and can speak English well.
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Very good. I only made a few grammatical changes, so your sentences seem more natural.
Jun 10th 2009 11:08 Hiromi

Great! Thank you.

I must take care of how I use a preposition.
Hiromi
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