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ボディビルは、人間のパフォーマンスが
他の生物を凌駕しうる数少ない競技だと思います。

人類史上最速のボルトですら、ハイエナにかないません。
全盛期のイアン・ソープも、大衆魚に負けるでしょう。
トライアスロンの目指す持久力さえ、渡り鳥のそれには遠く及びません。
格闘技を極めたところで、シマウマなどの草食動物の一蹴りに倒れるのは必至です。

また、力比べに限定しても
天賦の才を持った人間が重量挙げに専念したところで、
ゴリラの自然(じねん)の力と並ぶかどうか。

それに対して
ボディビルダーの肉体がステージで放つ
鮮烈な肉体美と
互角に張り合えるものは
手入れの行き届いた
サラブレッドの美しさくらいしか思いつきません。

行き着く先に何があるのか
これからも没頭することにより見つけたいです。

Bodybuilding is one of the few sports where human can possibly outperform among other creatures.

The fastest sprinter, Usain Bolt , cannot run as fast as a hyaena.
Ian Thorpe, at his prime period as a swimming competitor, would not swim as fast as a sardine.
The ideal stamina which triathlon competitors aim at, would lag far behind from that of a migratory bird.
Even if you were to master all the mixed martial arts, a kickback by a zebra, a herbivorous, will fatally injure you.
Besides these facts, even if I only discuss pure strength, I doubt if the a gifted superhuman athlete's power, spending years of dedication for lifting weights alone, can be barely comparable to that of an untrained gorilla.

On the contrary, the beauty, perfection and overwhelming impact emitted by a talented bodybuilder on the stage can be as competitive as, I believe, a thoroughbred horse with decent cares.

What will I discover after decades of dedication for iron dumbbells, rest and nutrition?
The answer is yet to be clear.
I will inch toward the possible answer, spending tremendous time and energy for it.
Oct 20th 2009 11:43 Riara

  • Bodybuilding is one of the few sports where human can possibly outperform among other creatures.
  • Bodybuilding is one of the few sports where humans can possibly outperform among other creatures.

 

  • The fastest sprinter, Usain Bolt , cannot run as fast as a hyaena.
  • The fastest sprinter, Usain Bolt, cannot run as fast as a hyena.

 

  • The ideal stamina which triathlon competitors aim at, would lag far behind from that of a migratory bird.
  • The ideal stamina which triathlon competitors aim at would lag far behind from that of a migratory bird.

 

  • Even if you were to master all the mixed martial arts, a kickback by a zebra, a herbivorous, will fatally injure you.
  • Even if you were to master all the mixed martial arts, a kick from a zebra, a herbivore, would fatally injure you.

 

  • Besides these facts, even if I only discuss pure strength, I doubt if the a gifted superhuman athlete's power, spending years of dedication for lifting weights alone, can be barely comparable to that of an untrained gorilla.
  • Besides these facts, even if I only discuss pure strength, I doubt if the a gifted superhuman athlete's power, spending years of dedication for lifting weights alone, could be comparable to that of an untrained gorilla.

 

  • On the contrary, the beauty, perfection and overwhelming impact emitted by a talented bodybuilder on the stage can be as competitive as, I believe, a thoroughbred horse with decent cares.
  • On the contrary, the beauty, perfection and overwhelming impact emitted by a talented bodybuilder on the stage can be as competitive as, I believe, a thoroughbred horse that is well cared for.

 

  • I will inch toward the possible answer, spending tremendous time and energy for it.
  • I will inch toward the possible answer, spending tremendous time and energy on it.

 

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