Please correct the following sentences.

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Hi.
I am writing the technical documents in English now.

Please teach me whether the following some sentences are right expressions.

(1)The IT support can be requested by Using "Live Meeting", Sharing "desktop screen" , and giving "Access control ".

(2)Contact the partner who want to share from "Office Communicator "

(3)Right-click at the address of the person who wants to share

kind regards
Jan 14th 2010 03:22 S-in-Japan

  • (1)The IT support can be requested by Using "Live Meeting", Sharing "desktop screen" , and giving "Access control ".
  • (1)The IT support can be requested by using "Live Meeting", Sharing "desktop screen" , and then giving "Access control ".

 

  • (2)Contact the partner who want to share from "Office Communicator "
  • (2)Contact the partner you want to share with from "Office Communicator "

 

  • (3)Right-click at the address of the person who wants to share
  • (3)Right-click at the address of the person you want to share with

 
Use verbs such as 'clicking', 'selecting' etc to give more detailed instructions. e.g.

Open 'Live Meeting' and select 'Sharing Desktop Screen', then click 'Access Control'.

We select options from a list, and click on buttons.
Jan 14th 2010 03:59

  • I am writing the technical documents in English now.
  • I am writing the technical documents in English now.

 

  • Please teach me whether the following some sentences are right expressions.
  • Please tell me whether the following some sentences are right expressions.

 
Very good!!! long time no see!
Jan 14th 2010 06:59 JUN☆

TO :S-in-Japan san
TO:Lorry-san

Thank you for correcting ☆

I really appreciate for your great help☆

I'll contact you later ☆

Thank you ☆

Jan 20th 2010 04:34 天神

  • Please teach me whether the following some sentences are right expressions.
  • Please teach me whether the following some sentences are right expressions.Please let me know whether the following expressions are correct.

 

  • (1)The IT support can be requested by Using "Live Meeting", Sharing "desktop screen" , and giving "Access control ".
  • (1)The IT support can be requested by Using "Live Meeting", Sharing "desktop screen" , and giving "Access control ".IT support can be requested by using Live Meeting, sharing "desktop screen", and selecting (?) "access control".Note: Some of your use of capitalisation is a bit strange. Remember we only capitalise proper nouns.

 

  • kind regards
  • kind regardsKind regards

 

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