Please correct the following sentences.
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I am writing the technical documents in English now.
Please teach me whether the following some sentences are right expressions.
(1)The IT support can be requested by Using "Live Meeting", Sharing "desktop screen" , and giving "Access control ".
(2)Contact the partner who want to share from "Office Communicator "
(3)Right-click at the address of the person who wants to share
kind regards
I am writing the technical documents in English now.
Please teach me whether the following some sentences are right expressions.
(1)The IT support can be requested by Using "Live Meeting", Sharing "desktop screen" , and giving "Access control ".
(2)Contact the partner who want to share from "Office Communicator "
(3)Right-click at the address of the person who wants to share
kind regards
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(1)The IT support can be requested by using "Live Meeting", Sharing "desktop screen" , and then giving "Access control ".
(2)Contact the partner you want to share with from "Office Communicator "
(3)Right-click at the address of the person you want to share with
Open 'Live Meeting' and select 'Sharing Desktop Screen', then click 'Access Control'.
We select options from a list, and click on buttons.
I am writing the technical documents in English now.
Please tell me whether the following some sentences are right expressions.
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Please teach me whether the following some sentences are right expressions.Please let me know whether the following expressions are correct.
(1)The IT support can be requested by Using "Live Meeting", Sharing "desktop screen" , and giving "Access control ".IT support can be requested by using Live Meeting, sharing "desktop screen", and selecting (?) "access control".Note: Some of your use of capitalisation is a bit strange. Remember we only capitalise proper nouns.
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