I like the film----- Hairspray

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I watched a very good moive yesterday.
The story of the film was happened in 1960s in America , and it was a music theater .
The moive told a story about a big girl who loved singing and dancing very much . Her name was Tracy . Although Tracy had a big weight ,she was outgoing and always confidence . She could sing and dance whenever she wanted , no matter she was sad or happy she expressed herself by music . What' more , she was a gril who loved peace . She would like to make friend with nigro people , and took part in the nigro's party , and helped them to struggl for the chance of a nigro' s day on TV show .
I like Tracy very much , because she couraged enough to pursue her dreams and never gave up . She was so confidence that she always looked very charming , and at last she falled in love with a handsome young man .
Jul 22nd 2008 23:11 gc3195

  • I watched a very good moive yesterday.
  • I watched a very good movie yesterday.

 

  • The story of the film was happened in 1960s in America , and it was a music theater .
  • The story of the film was about what happened in the 1960s in America , and it was a music theater musical.

 

  • The moive told a story about a big girl who loved singing and dancing very much .
  • The moive told a story about a big girl who loved singing and dancing very much.

 

  • Her name was Tracy .
  • Her name was Tracy.

 

  • Although Tracy had a big weight ,she was outgoing and always confidence .
  • Although Tracy had a big weight weighed a lot, she was outgoing and always confident. (the weight was not external to her - perhaps saying she was a bit tubby would do.)

 

  • She could sing and dance whenever she wanted , no matter she was sad or happy she expressed herself by music .
  • She could sing and dance whenever she wanted, no matter whether she was sad or happy she expressed herself by music .

 

  • What' more , she was a gril who loved peace .
  • What's more, she was a gril girl who loved peace.

 

  • She would like to make friend with nigro people , and took part in the nigro's party , and helped them to struggl for the chance of a nigro' s day on TV show .
  • She would liked to make friends with negro people, and took part in a negro's party, and helped them to struggle for the chance of a negro's day on a TV show.

 

  • I like Tracy very much , because she couraged enough to pursue her dreams and never gave up .
  • I like Tracy very much, because she couraged was courageous enough to pursue her dreams and never gave up.

 

  • She was so confidence that she always looked very charming , and at last she falled in love with a handsome young man .
  • She was so confident that she always looked very charming, and at last she falled fell in love with a handsome young man.

 
Jul 23rd 2008 00:57 time

Hi~~yoyo..how are you??

It's been so a long since I saw your entry..
Jul 26th 2008 14:43 yoyo

Hello! I'm ok , and thank you for your correction of my journal .
I have not entried lang-8 for a long time , because I have to prepare my final exams , and after that we should do a practical training out school for a mouth .
I am on my summer vacation now ,and I have much time to log on lang-8 to communicate with you . I hope to see you again .

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