Japanese national team lost the game against Paraguay

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Unfortunately, Japanese national team lost the game against Paraguay in a penalty shootout.

Although everyone was saying that Japanese national team would lose in the qualifying round before the World Cup,
they advanced to the final 16 and gave the people great courage.

Sport athlete has been active internationally since young, so they become confidence and feel pride in their way of life.
I watched in awe of the interview for Hasebe who is my junior fellow in high school.

By the way, although I have been watching the soccer game since I was little,
recently I began to watch the soccer game from different standpoint.
That is to watch the soccer game comparing with my own job.

In the World Cup, when a player got a goal, he held up fists and wrap around the team members.
When a player miss and lose in penalty kicks, he broke down and cried.

On the other hand, although I am writing a patent application,
I do not hold up fists and cry.

If I do that everyday, I might get tired easily.
However, I would experience for once the event which is as if I get a goal in World Cup.

So I want to work in an increasingly global business climate.
Jul 21st 2010 06:40 ニコニコ

  • Unfortunately, Japanese national team lost the game against Paraguay in a penalty shootout.
  • Unfortunately, the Japanese national team lost the game against Paraguay in a penalty shootout.

 

  • Although everyone was saying that Japanese national team would lose in the qualifying round before the World Cup,
  • Although everyone was saying that the Japanese national team would lose in the qualifying round before the World Cup,

 

  • Sport athlete has been active internationally since young, so they become confidence and feel pride in their way of life.
  • The sports athletes have been actaive internationally since they were young, so they became confident and feel pride in their way of life.

 

  • I watched in awe of the interview for Hasebe who is my junior fellow in high school.
  • I watched in awe of the interview for Hasebe, who is my junior fellow in high school.

 

  • By the way, although I have been watching the soccer game since I was little,
  • By the way, although I have been watching the soccer game since I was little,

 

  • recently I began to watch the soccer game from different standpoint.
  • recently I began to watch the soccer game from different standpoint:

 

  • That is to watch the soccer game comparing with my own job.
  • That is to watch the soccer game and comparing it with my own job.

 

  • In the World Cup, when a player got a goal, he held up fists and wrap around the team members.
  • In the World Cup, when a player got a goal, he held up fists and hugged the team members. *I think "hugged" is the word you were trying to find. Although "wrapped around" makessense, it does not sound very natural.^^;*

 

  • When a player miss and lose in penalty kicks, he broke down and cried.
  • When a player missed and lost in penalty kicks, he broke down and cried.

 

  • I do not hold up fists and cry.
  • I do not hold up my fists and cry;

 

  • If I do that everyday, I might get tired easily.
  • If I do that everyday, I might get tired easily. *I used a semicolon to join the two sentences, making the general flow of them much more natural.^^*

 

  • However, I would experience for once the event which is as if I get a goal in World Cup.
  • However, I wouldlike to experience for once the event which is as if I got a goal in The World Cup.

 
Very good English. Many of the sentence structures were more complex, which is good!^^ If you have any questions about English please do not hesitate to ask!^^
Shinya
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  • English, Mandarin

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