iPhone 4

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Rosily's latest journal entries May 30th 2011 15:36
Last Saturday I dropped by an appliance store after my work. Although it was raining heavily, I had a whim to visit there. My cell phone was old type, so I thought it was time to change the new one.

I'm not familiar with that kind of gadget, so thoroughly I relied on the staff. One of the staff recommended that I get the newest type-iPhone 4 . I know the name, but I wasn't sure if I would be able to deal with the state-of-the-art model....However, I decided to get the model, taking all things into consideration. I always want to be immersed in English as much as possible during the times of the day, so the gadget comes in handy I thought.

After purchasing the newest model, right away I tried to take the necessary steps so that the new settings could take effect.
I managed to set everything, and downloaded all applications I'm interested in. To my surprise, there are tremendous free apps. Almost all of the apps I downloaded were related to English to improve my skills.

Anyway, it seems to take time for me to get used to using the phone....lol
May 30th 2011 16:07 Emi

  • My cell phone was old type, so I thought it was time to change the new one.
  • My cell phone was (the) old type, so I thought it was time to change the new one. My cell phone was old-fashioned, so I thought it was about time to buy new one.

 

  • I'm not familiar with that kind of gadget, so thoroughly I relied on the staff.
  • I didn't know much about the gadgets, so I asked a salesclerk some advice.

 

  • One of the staff recommended that I get the newest type-iPhone 4 .
  • He (She) recommended me the newest type-iPhone 4 .

 

  • I know the name, but I wasn't sure if I would be able to deal with the state-of-the-art model....
  • The name was familiar, but I wasn't sure how to use the state-of-the-art model....

 

  • However, I decided to get the model, taking all things into consideration.
  • After a long hesitation, I finally decided to get the one. うわ、すごい!

 

  • I always want to be immersed in English as much as possible during the times of the day, so the gadget comes in handy I thought.
  • Since I'd been always wanting to study English, the gadget would be useful, I thought.

 

  • After purchasing the newest model, right away I tried to take the necessary steps so that the new settings could take effect.
  • As soon as I got home, I tried the new one.

 

  • I managed to set everything, and downloaded all applications I'm interested in.
  • I managed to download all applications I'd been interested in.

 

  • To my surprise, there are tremendous free apps.
  • I found that there were lots of free apps on the Net. そうなんだ~~~。

 

  • Almost all of the apps I downloaded were related to English to improve my skills.
  • Some of them seemed helpful to improve my English.

 

  • Anyway, it seems to take time for me to get used to using the phone....
  • I know it might take time to get used to the new phone, I'm pretty happy now!

 
いいな~~~~。
私の英文もぜひぜひ添削してください!
最近、なかなか直してもらえなくて...。
lang-8から遠ざかっていたから、訪問してくれる人が激減よ...。
May 30th 2011 16:44 Rosily
Thank you for visiting and giving me your comment.

>>私の英文もぜひぜひ添削してください!
I'm aftaid, but I can't do that because I'm Japanese and one of English learners. I might be able to tell you about abvious grammatical mistakes, though. As for the expressions or sentences, I try not to point out to other learners.

あくまでもnon-nativeですし、ネイティブ並みのスキルは持っていないので、、、。
May 30th 2011 17:29 Emi
Please do! I don't have enough skills as you mentioned, but I do believe that reading someone's journals and trying to find another way of writing would be great to improve our English skills. Feel free to try. I know you're a Japanese! (^^)
May 30th 2011 18:48 Emi
I forgot to tell you this... If you're offended by my attempt, please say so. I won't be offended by your corrections, so please do it for me. I need somebody's ideas.
May 30th 2011 18:31 Rosily
Of course, I appreciate your point, and that must be a good way to improve. That's why actually I make a point of reading other journals, and learn other expressions I've never come up with.
I don't go out of my way to point out. Even if I tell other learners about other ways in order to improve our skills, there's no way, though, I'll offer at first without my suggestions.

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