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Lang-8 is awesome!

I can practice my english and my japanese a lot and meet abroad people
here!
In my city i have just a person who i can really practice english, it's my Teacher's conversation, he's from San diego california and he's not just my teacher, he's also friend of mine.We go for a ride,we speak in english
at everywhere we go, i'ts cool.
I wanna to meet more abroad people, manly who know or speak english and japanese to help or people who are learning portuguese for i help then.

If want to Know me...just Add!

Good Bye! Sayonara!


Aug 24th 2009 12:39 xaixai

  • I can practice my english and my japanese a lot and meet abroad people
  • I can practice my English and my Japanese a lot and meet abroad foreign people here!

 

  • In my city i have just a person who i can really practice english, it's my Teacher's conversation, he's from San diego california and he's not just my teacher, he's also friend of mine.
  • This sentence is too long and too intertwining. My professor in my writing class told me that we should write one idea per sentence so that the readers won't be confused on what you're trying to say. In my city, I have just a one person who I can really practice English with. He's my teacher conversation, he's from San Diego, California. and He's not just my teacher, he's also a friend of mine. Also, don't forget to use capital letters for proper nouns like English and San Diego, California

 

  • We go for a ride,we speak in english
  • When we go for a ride, we speak in English.

 

  • at everywhere we go, i'ts cool.
  • at everywhere we go, i'ts cool. --> I don't exactly know what you're trying to say here. Are you saying that "we go to cool places?"

 

  • I wanna to meet more abroad people, manly who know or speak english and japanese to help or people who are learning portuguese for i help then.
  • I want to meet more abroad foreign people (or you can simply say foreigners), mainly those who know or speak English and Japanese to help or people who are learning Portuguese for i help then. so that I could help them as well.

 
I'm not very familiar with the use of this site yet as I am still a new user, so I hope you understood my corrections. Hehe!

So basically, here are the things that you should always keep in mind:

-shorter sentences are easier to understand
-use capital letters for proper nouns


Good luck! ;)
Aug 26th 2009 02:36 Rosalez

Thanks a lot XAI .... it's really helped me!

Come back again!

xD
Rosalez
  • Portuguese(Brazil)
  • English, Japanese

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