いち。。。こんばわ！

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Sep 14th 2009 09:22

ぼくはカイオロサレスデス。わたしはぶらじるじんです。ぼくはにほんごおかいています。

さよなら！

Sep 14th 2009 09:51 Yosuke

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Good jobs:)

Sep 14th 2009 10:26 Rosalez

Thanks for the correction.this is my first japanese text!
I`m a little proud with this!

See you!

Sep 14th 2009 12:19 yun

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あとは、Yosukeさんの添削通りだと思います。

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