British drama "Merlin"

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Sep 24th 2010 03:18

my English is poor. ^_^

A few months ago, Chinese television played a British drama "Merlin".
Before that, I almost don't know the story of the British King Arthur, and I look re-collected information about him.
He really is a legendary king of England in 5th century.

He is the king of England, the leader of the Knights of the Round Table, an almost mythical legend person. After the collapse of the Roman Empire, he led by the Knights of the Round Table unified British Isles, he was later known as King Arthur.

Actor is Very good. A handsome actor playing Arthur, a very cute actor playing Merlin,a very beautiful actor playing Morgana.

Hope that TV station can be introduced Season2 and Season3.

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Sep 24th 2010 03:41 明朗阳光

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Japanese , English

Can you help me to modify the syntax of this article？
Thank you，everybody. I know my English is very poor.-_-!

Sep 24th 2010 03:45 Tamiko

English
Korean , Japanese

A few months ago, Chinese television played a British drama "Merlin".
A few months ago, Chinese television played aired a British drama called "Merlin".

Before that, I almost don't know the story of the British King Arthur, and I look re-collected information about him.
Before that, I almost don't didn't really know the story of the British King Arthur, and so I looked up re-collected information about him.

He really is a legendary king of England in 5th century.
He really is was a legendary king of England in the 5th century. Use past tense here because King Arthur existed in the past.

He is the king of England, the leader of the Knights of the Round Table, an almost mythical legend person.
He is was the king of England and the leader of the Knights of the Round Table, an almost mythical legend person almost a person of mythical legend.

After the collapse of the Roman Empire, he led by the Knights of the Round Table unified British Isles, he was later known as King Arthur.
After the collapse of the Roman Empire, he led by the Knights of the Round Table and unified the British Isles. He was later known as King Arthur.

Actor is Very good.
The actor is very good. (If you are talking about the actors, then "The actors are very good")

A handsome actor playing Arthur, a very cute actor playing Merlin,a very beautiful actor playing Morgana.
A handsome actor plays Arthur, a very cute actor plays Merlin, and a very beautiful actor actress plays Morgana.