movie
Jun 17th 2009 11:26
First of all, thanks all to correction my poor english and encourage me
Thanks to one correted my poor english
Even though my enghlish is poor,
I write english diary with confidence.
Last night I saw the movie on tv at 01:00
The movie named Saw 4...
Frist time I saw the movie is when i'm high school student
That day i saw the movie of Saw 3
That day to saw the movie of Saw 3 is very hard to me to see
but now i see the movie of Saw series very well
anyway today i wake up too late because I saw the movie too late
Just wake up... not wash my face
diary is finished as soon as i wash my face !!
Thanks to one correted my poor english
Even though my enghlish is poor,
I write english diary with confidence.
Last night I saw the movie on tv at 01:00
The movie named Saw 4...
Frist time I saw the movie is when i'm high school student
That day i saw the movie of Saw 3
That day to saw the movie of Saw 3 is very hard to me to see
but now i see the movie of Saw series very well
anyway today i wake up too late because I saw the movie too late
Just wake up... not wash my face
diary is finished as soon as i wash my face !!
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The movie named called Saw 4...
Frist/The First time I saw the movie is was when i was a high school student.
First of all, thanks for all to the corrections to my poor english and for encourageing me
Thanks to oneeveryone who corrected my poor english
The movie is named Saw 4... (or "the name of the movie is Saw 4" ^^)
The frist time that I saw the movie iswas when i'm I was a high school student
That day i sawwatched the movie of Saw 3
That day to saw the movie of Saw 3 is very hard tofor me to see
but now i can seewatch the movies of Saw in series very well
anyway today i wakewoke up too late because I saw the movie too late
I just wakewoke up...
not I didn't wash my face
My diary is finished as soon as i wash my face !!
I am too embarrased to write my first diary in Japanese XD I will wait until I am better...
That day i saw the movie of Saw 3
That day to I saw the movie of Saw 3 was very hard to me to see
but now i see the movie of Saw series very well
I did what i thought..I hope i'll be better!
A trick for you :
Think more positive guy! You are learning yet... just pay attention in your growth!
Dont you clain cause your errors! Straight ahead!
Good luck for you!