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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of にっく(Nick_smallworld)'s latest journal entries Feb 17th 2011 10:47 Snow Tokyo commuters
This week began with snow in Japan.

Tokyo, the largest city in Japan, has many trains and bus companies, and they take a lot of commuters every day.
Once it snows, almost all of them are effected by weather, and destruptions and delays occur.

Monday was snowy day, so the confusions of commuter lines happened. Many office workers had the effections by its confusions.

Now the weather has calmed down, but there is still snow in side of roads and railways.
Feb 17th 2011 11:15 lil miss shy

  • Many office workers had the effections by its confusions.
  • Many office workers was effcet by its confusions.

 

  • Now the weather has calmed down, but there is still snow in side of roads and railways.
  • Now the weather has calmed down, but there are still snow in side of roads and on railways.

 
Feb 19th 2011 16:34 にっく(Nick_smallworld)
>lil miss shy

Really thank you for your corrections!
Excuse me for my late reply.
Feb 17th 2011 11:15 Ameerkat

  • Tokyo, the largest city in Japan, has many trains and bus companies, and they take a lot of commuters every day.
  • Tokyo, the largest city in Japan has many trains and bus companies, and they take a lot of commuters every day.

 

  • Monday was snowy day, so the confusions of commuter lines happened.
  • Monday was a snowy day, so the confusion of commuter lines happened.

 

  • Many office workers had the effections by its confusions.
  • Many office workers had been effected by this.

 
Offered a few corrections, you have a good grasp of English!
Feb 19th 2011 16:35 にっく(Nick_smallworld)
>Ameerkat

Thank you for your corrections!
Excuse me for my late reply.

BTW, your picture is a funky!

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