If you know...

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Reikasan's latest journal entries Feb 24th 2010 08:15 Love
Do you know what is Love?
I really don't know it...

When I was in Japan, I thought I understand it.
But now, I complete lost it...

I'm afraid I might be hurt from love.
I don't want to go this way, but sometimes I can't control my destiny.

My friend said "Love" was just a power game.
It might be true.
If it's a power game, I want to know how I can win it.

If you know about love and also how you can win the game, please tell me.
Feb 24th 2010 08:22 Wintour

  • If you know...
  • Do You Know...?

 

  • Do you know what is Love?
  • Do you know what is love is?

 

  • I really don't know it...
  • I really don't know.

 

  • When I was in Japan, I thought I understand it.
  • When I was in Japan, I thought I understood it, but now I am completely lost.

 

  • But now, I complete lost it...
  • But now, I complete lost it...

 

  • I'm afraid I might be hurt from love.
  • I'm afraid I might be hurt from by love.

 

  • I don't want to go this way, but sometimes I can't control my destiny.
  • I don't want it to be this way, but sometimes you can't control your destiny.

 

  • My friend said "Love" was just a power game.
  • My friend said "Love" was just a game of power ; this might be true.

 

  • It might be true.
  • It might be true.

 
Not bad, just work on your word order and try to conjoin some sentences - especially when they are relevant to the same thing and express the same idea.
Feb 24th 2010 17:21 Jacob

Awww, I always think with love that you don't know what it is until you find it again. I am sure you will soon.
Feb 25th 2010 06:11 Reikasan

Wintour-sama,

Thank you for your corrections and advice!
Your corrections made my entry very natural English!
I'm not sure I can do same as you, but I'll try it!
Thanks!!!
Feb 25th 2010 06:15 Reikasan

BlueCheese-sama,

Thank you for your comment!

I might have found it...
No, I think it's not love, it might be unrequited love...
Feb 25th 2010 08:24 Jacob

Well I wish you luck, hopefully it will turn out for the best. I am sure you deserve it.
Feb 27th 2010 20:38 Reikasan

I hope so too.
Finally I wanna get it...
But I guess it takes long time...

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