Help me with my Homework...!!!!!!

Diary Writing a diary is the homework for today, and we school now have to write it with more sentences than 250 words.

Thank you I do not know how the I'm grateful for your corrections are correct.

I am happy and I would like some advices on this.

Hello every boys and girls.

I was a member of the a basketball team.

However, there is now I have this great interest, nowadays in soccer.

It was called to be football. (You should change those words in past tense when your verb is in past tense.)

In basketball, you need to gets a lots of points.

There are many points over 100 games out there, which recorded more than 100 points.

soccer is not played by getting a gets lots of points.

Therefore, one risk one’s mind is very strong points. (What? ぜんぜん分かりません)

There is a look of frustration and disappointment then when you hit a shot and really disappointing. (What? これもぜんぜん分かりません)

Also, players with experience great joy into the with that point.

The soccer players are filled with great joy with that into the point.

The audience for several minutes, soak celebrate in the joy.

Only one significant change in The flow of the game changes with just and the result a points.

Basketball is different and yet, it is also as exciting excited to have play football.

There are many clubs, and there are many leagues too.

So far the two times I have been able to watch football two times.

European soccer is not enough for me, but it is very interesting.

I live in Kobe and I we have is that the team Vissel Kobe.

But Our team is not too strong, and so local supporters resent.

Recent.

I heard remembered that I went to watch a soccer game in Europe is with a friend of mine.

It took me ６ million yen in Japanese yen.(Maybe 60 thousand dollars?)

So For now the I will just keep my money will not go. (Money don't have legs to go.)

I have a job to study at a university's and graduate school. I do not know when will I get have the chance to watch soccer. I want to watch it someday.