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About My High School Life

I studied　a lot when I live in Koubetakathuka High school .

Now, I　think　to if you would like to go entry to school　.

I do not want to graduate yet.

Because I love everyone in the school.

particularly,　I have best friends.

We enjoyed our high school life.

Also,I am in a doing band　action.

The band name is ANNNY.

A is for Aimi, who plays the　guitar　and　chorus .

N stands for　Nachi,is who plays bass.

N is for Nami,is and she plays the guitar　and keyboard .

N is stands for Nathu,is who plays the drums.

Y is for Yui, our vocalist and guitarist. is vocal and guitar.

We　did had a concert　six times.

We had our first concert isdone 2 years ago.

I　to feel　felt the tension but it was and　enjoyable .

But,After we finished,I to feel achievement felt that I had achieved something.

I think　to that I should continue　to play.

And,I should practice hard　to play in playing the piano and the guitar hard.

eventually ,We becameare best friends.

laughter. worries. anger・・・.

When we graduate graduation ,we to will go on separate away　routes.

I will go to a vocational school.

I must　to start fulfilling up 　to 　my　dreams.

Because , I enjoyed my short 　scarce　school life. (You only use the word 'scarce' on things, which are quantifiable. You say scarce resources, but not scarce life.)

I studied a lot when I went to Koubetakathuka High school. (You usually "go to" a school.)

Now, I wonder if you would like to attend this school.

I do not want to graduate (Combine this sentence with the next one.)

because I love everyone in the school.

In particular, I have my best friends: ("In particular" goes in the beginning of a sentence. "particularly" goes in the middle of a sentence.)

Aimi, Nachi, Nami, Nathu, Yui, Kumi, Ayu, Moa (You need a space after a comma.)

We are enjoying high school life.

Also, I am part of a band.

The band name is ANNNY.

A is Aimi, she is guitar and chorus.

N is Nachi, she is bass.

N is Nami, she is guitar and keyboard.

N is Nathu, she is drums. (Or: N is Nathu, I am drums.)

Y is Yui, she is vocals and guitar.

We had six concerts.

The first concert was 2 years ago.

I felt both tension and enjoyment.

But, after finishing, I felt a sense of achievement.

I think I'll continue to play.

And, I practice playing the piano and the guitar hard.

Eventually, we are best friends.

Laughter, worry, anger...

These are my important treasures.

When we graduate, we will go on our separate paths.

I will go to vocational school.

We will start up toward my dream.

Becouse , I enjoy a scarce school life.

I studied　a lot when I live in Koubetakathuka High school .I studied a lot throughout my duration at Koubetakathuka High school.

Now,I　think　to if you like to entry to school　.Now, I am happy I attended this school. (I think this is what you are trying to say)

particularly,　I have best friends.You may combine the last three sentences:I do not want to graduate because I love everyone in school, particularly my best friends.

We enjoing High school Life.We are enjoying high school life together.

Also,I doing band　action.We have a band together.

First concert isdone 2 years ago.*Consider combining this sentence with the previous one: "We held 6 concerts in the past 2 years."

I　to feel　tension and　enjoyable .*tension seems negative, I would rephrase with: "I was nervous but it was enjoyable."

But,After finnish,I to feel achievement .Once it was over I had a great feeling of achievement.

I think　to continue　to play.This feeling makes me want to continue playing

And,I practice　to play the piano and the guitar hard.I practice playing the piano as well the guitar with persevearence.

Essentially ,we are best friends.

laugh,worry ,angry・・・.The laughter, the anger, and the anxiety we all shared

are all memories I treasure.

It is my important　 treasure.I would delete this.

When we graduation ,We to go away　route.When we graduate, we will all go separate routes.

We　to start up 　to 　my　dream.Combine with previous sentence:"I will go to vocational school to get me started on the way to my dream.

Becouse , I enjoy 　scarce　school life.(If I understood what you are trying to say...)I would say: I will always remember the joys of high school.