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detail of speech contest.

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of shinichiro's latest journal entries Nov 09th 2009 18:18
hello. how are you? now I will write detail about speech contest .

at last Friday. I had a speech contest. cotestants were over 40 students who are graduate students , high school students , and university students. almost all contestants have studied abroad before and also pronaunciation is better than me . I have't studied abroad yet and also I never have been to foreign countries yet.

in my speech , I was very nervous .then my brain became white. and I forgot first sentence. after flown a couple of secounds . I could speak my speech fluently . but I missed pronaunciation of volunteer. I missed to accent. I took accent to 'teer' . but correct accent is 'vo' . I regret about it now.

continue next time . because it is tired for you to revise my journal.
thank you for seeing my sentence.
Nov 09th 2009 23:43 KillerStella
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  • Japanese

  • now I will write detail about speech contest .
  • now I will write detail about my speech contest .
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  • at last Friday.
  • at last Friday,
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  • cotestants were over 40 students who are graduate students , high school students , and university students.
  • There were over 40 students competing who are graduate students , high school students , and university students.
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  • almost all contestants have studied abroad before and also pronaunciation is better than me .
  • almost all contestants have studied abroad before and also their pronunciation is better than mine .
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  • I have't studied abroad yet and also I never have been to foreign countries yet.
  • I haven't studied abroad yet and also I never have been to foreign countries yet.
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  • in my speech , I was very nervous .
  • During my speech , I was very nervous .
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  • then my brain became white.
  • then my brain became white. ("Then I blanked out" is most common phrase.)
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  • and I forgot first sentence.
  • and I forgot the first sentence.
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  • after flown a couple of secounds .
  • after flown a couple of seconds flew by .
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  • I could speak my speech fluently .
  • I could say my speech fluently .
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  • but I missed pronaunciation of volunteer.
  • but I missed the pronunciation of volunteer.
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  • I missed to accent.
  • I missed to accent. ("I messed up the accent"?)
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  • I regret about it now.
  • I regret about it now.
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  • continue next time .
  • I will continue next time .
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  • because it is tired for you to revise my journal.
  • because I would like (??) you to revise my journal.
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  • thank you for seeing my sentence.
  • thank you for reading my sentences.
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Hang in there!
I am sure your speech was still ok. (: Pronunciation is difficult!
Nov 10th 2009 08:55 shinichiro
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  • English

wow hank you very much .KillerStella .

I am very happy.
Nov 10th 2009 10:28 Lija リア
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  • Japanese

  • detail of speech contest.
  • Details of speech contest.
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  • hello.
  • Hello.
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  • how are you?
  • How are you?
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  • now I will write detail about speech contest .
  • I will now write about the details of my speech contest.
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  • at last Friday.
  • at Last Friday,
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  • cotestants were over 40 students who are graduate students , high school students , and university students.
  • The contestants were over 40 students who are graduate students, high school students, and university students.
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  • almost all contestants have studied abroad before and also pronaunciation is better than me .
  • Almost all contestants have studied abroad before and so their pronunciation is better than mine.
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  • I have't studied abroad yet and also I never have been to foreign countries yet.
  • I haven't studied abroad yet and also I never have been to foreign countries before.
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  • in my speech , I was very nervous .
  • During my speech, I was very nervous.
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  • then my brain became white.
  • Then I blanked out and forgot the first sentence.
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  • and I forgot first sentence.
  • and I forgot first sentence.
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  • after flown a couple of secounds .
  • A few seconds later,
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  • I could speak my speech fluently .
  • I could speak my speech fluently, but I missed the pronunciation of volunteer.
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  • but I missed pronaunciation of volunteer.
  • but I missed pronaunciation of volunteer.
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  • I regret about it now.
  • I regret about it now.
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  • continue next time .
  • I will try again next time.
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  • because it is tired for you to revise my journal.
  • It may be tiring for you to revise my journal, so thank you for reading it anyway.
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  • thank you for seeing my sentence.
  • thank you for seeing my sentence.
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Good job!
がんばってね！:]
Nov 10th 2009 10:38 shinichiro
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  • English

thank you lija . I m very happy.
shinichiro
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