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Shopping center in suburb It sounds a lot like what Wal-mart is doing to small towns here in America. When they move in, all of the small businesses go broke and ...
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Whaling >Ethan
Thank you very much for your comment. I have been studying English for many years, but still I am not able to use it without t...
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Whaling I'm impressed with your skill with English - I don't think I could write something that complex in Japanese yet! I corrected what I coul...
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Genius It's very fun for me to have interesting response on the issue I wrote, as well as I can have comment to my English itself.
As there a...
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Genius Deas, no I think that's the right thing to do, there's many different ways to say stuff, so it's good to share more! :) I'm new also.
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Genius This is a classic psychological concept called "conditioning." It really resembles the Skinner box or Pavlov's dogs. While I ag...
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Genius This was interesting, even though I disagree that everyone can be a genius. You seem to be a genius though, with your English! Sorry, tha...
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Package Ticket I'm usually picky about hotels, so I buy the train tickets and hotel separately. But I didn't know that we can stay at a better hotel wi...
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Rainy season Your English is excellent!
Most of the things I changed were a matter of sounding more natural.
In England, we're just getting into t...
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Electric Vehicle China and Japan's increasing reliance on nuclear power worries me. There are already leaks in Japanese nuclear reactors from earthquakes...
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Electric Vehicle Yes, you are right. Now all the consumption cannot be covered by atomic power generation, which makes up only about 30% of the total powe...
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Electric Vehicle We are struggling to find the alternative fuels, but recently I wonder if electric cars can save the world or not.
I've heard that &...
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How many time for commute? I was living in the middle of Tokyo and in a suburb. In the middle of Tokyo, the rent was 170,000 yen for a wooden apartment of 2DK. It...
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How many time for commute? Thank you for your comment.
It is difficult for me to correctly use "plurals" and "singulars", since Japanese does...
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How many time for commute? You seem to be getting "is" and "are" mixed up.
Also you're having trouble with other plurals and singulars.
Your w...
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English for Japanese Yes, I have been doing "overlapping" and "shadowing" using i-pod. So I become accustomed to listening to English comp...
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English for Japanese True, some native speakers skip some of the consonants in a word. I guess it can be hard to understand for foreigners learning English.
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English for Japanese How about doing some "overlapping" and "shadowing"? You can use cheaper materials like NHK's English programs. And ...
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English for Japanese Thank you for your comments. It's very helpful for me.
May be, I have wrong understanding on relationship of consonants and vowel, and o...
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English for Japanese Yes, English and Japanese grammar and pronunciation are very different. But I've met some Japanese people who are very good at English!
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English for Japanese I'm not a native English speaker, but I am struggling to learn how to teach English to business people, so I corrected some of your sente...
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Encounter CORRECTED:
Surfing the web, I happened to find Lang-8.
It is a very good tool for helping me improve my English!
I'm glad I found La...
It sounds a lot like what Wal-mart is doing to small towns here in America. When they move in, all of the small businesses go broke and ...
>Ethan Thank you very much for your comment. I have been studying English for many years, but still I am not able to use it without t...
I'm impressed with your skill with English - I don't think I could write something that complex in Japanese yet! I corrected what I coul...
It's very fun for me to have interesting response on the issue I wrote, as well as I can have comment to my English itself. As there a...
"Genius is one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration." This is what Thomas Edison said, and this is my most favori...
Deas, no I think that's the right thing to do, there's many different ways to say stuff, so it's good to share more! :) I'm new also.
Aaaah - sorry Lynn! I didn't mean to overwrite your corrections. I'm new at this... Whoops. :-/
This is a classic psychological concept called "conditioning." It really resembles the Skinner box or Pavlov's dogs. While I ag...
This was interesting, even though I disagree that everyone can be a genius. You seem to be a genius though, with your English! Sorry, tha...
I'm usually picky about hotels, so I buy the train tickets and hotel separately. But I didn't know that we can stay at a better hotel wi...
* if you are using "you will", go is better that "come". "you will" is not needed if you use come (come is ...
:) Your English is very good. Package tickets sound very useful for saving money. ^_^
添削ありがとうございます。ぎこちない英語をつかっていることだと思います。たくさん書いて慣れるより他はないですね(たくさん添削頂ければ助かります)。
Your English is excellent! Most of the things I changed were a matter of sounding more natural. In England, we're just getting into t...
晴耕雨読ですね(^^) When the rainy season is over, we would say, "Too hot!" may times a day. I don't like summer in Japan....
China and Japan's increasing reliance on nuclear power worries me. There are already leaks in Japanese nuclear reactors from earthquakes...
Yes, you are right. Now all the consumption cannot be covered by atomic power generation, which makes up only about 30% of the total powe...
We are struggling to find the alternative fuels, but recently I wonder if electric cars can save the world or not. I've heard that &...
I hope there's an alternative for gas soon.
I was living in the middle of Tokyo and in a suburb. In the middle of Tokyo, the rent was 170,000 yen for a wooden apartment of 2DK. It...
Thank you for your comment. It is difficult for me to correctly use "plurals" and "singulars", since Japanese does...
You seem to be getting "is" and "are" mixed up. Also you're having trouble with other plurals and singulars. Your w...
添削頂いた文章をみると、とても自然な感じがします。添削ありがとうございました。自分でも多少感じているですが、私が書いた英語はやはり表現がまわりくどい部分があるのでしょうか? それにしても、日本語お上手ですね。
日本の家の事について、勉強になりました。 やはり、結構高いですよね。自分で現在日本で一人暮らしをしていますが、敷金と礼金が安いところを見つけるのが難しかったです。
豊かな言葉を使っていますね。この様に書き続いて下さい。 大体動詞の活動が時々間違えているだけだと思います。
Yes, I have been doing "overlapping" and "shadowing" using i-pod. So I become accustomed to listening to English comp...
True, some native speakers skip some of the consonants in a word. I guess it can be hard to understand for foreigners learning English.
How about doing some "overlapping" and "shadowing"? You can use cheaper materials like NHK's English programs. And ...
Thank you for your comments. It's very helpful for me. May be, I have wrong understanding on relationship of consonants and vowel, and o...
Yes, English and Japanese grammar and pronunciation are very different. But I've met some Japanese people who are very good at English! ...
I'm not a native English speaker, but I am struggling to learn how to teach English to business people, so I corrected some of your sente...
CORRECTED: Surfing the web, I happened to find Lang-8. It is a very good tool for helping me improve my English! I'm glad I found La...