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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of hito's latest journal entries Jul 02nd 2009 13:27
today,i will do the two part-time-job interview.
One is watch dog at bathing pool.One is deliver.
At other time, I study English and about computer.
For I'll enter school next year.

Beginning today,note in this daiary.
Folks,Thank you for your continued help.
Jul 02nd 2009 13:41 IroEnpitsu

  • today,i will do the two part-time-job interview.
  • Today,i will go to two part-time-job interviews.

 

  • One is watch dog at bathing pool.
  • One is a lifeguard at a bathing pool.

 

  • One is deliver.
  • One is a delivery-man.

 

  • At other time, I study English and about computer.
  • At other times, I study English and about computers.

 

  • For I'll enter school next year.
  • Because I'll start school next year.

 

  • Beginning today,note in this daiary.
  • Beginning today,I will write notes in this diary.

 
初めまして!
ええ、監視員はすごい。ちょっと詰まらないですね。じょうだん、じょうだん。
配送について何配送しますか?
Jul 02nd 2009 13:48 Blackshark

  • today,i will do the two part-time-job interview.
  • Today, i will do the I have two part-time-job interviews.

 

  • One is watch dog at bathing pool.
  • One is to watch a dog at bathing swimming pool. (Or "watch dogs" if you mean multiple dogs)

 

  • One is deliver.
  • One is deliveries. (Do you mean you will be delivering things to different places?)

 

  • At other time, I study English and about computer.
  • At other time Later, I will study English and about computers.

 

  • For I'll enter school next year.
  • For Because I'll enter (or "start") school next year.

 

  • Beginning today,note in this daiary.
  • Beginning today,note in this diary. (I am not sure what you mean to say here. Do you mean "beginning today I will write in this diary"?)

 

  • Folks,Thank you for your continued help.
  • Folks Everyone, thank you for your continued help.

 
Hito, this is very good so far. There were a few sentences I did not understand but I think you have started learning English well. Keep practicing and writing more. You will improve. Please ask me if you need any help. :)
Jul 02nd 2009 13:49 Blackshark

Oh lifeguard. I didn't even think of that. Good catch IroEnpitsu! :)
Jul 02nd 2009 14:17 IroEnpitsu

Hey Blacksharkさん
監視員について当てりました。
ちがうかもしれない。
たぶん、「犬を見て」が正しい。(^_^)
Jul 02nd 2009 16:01 hito

thank you for your castigation!

配達はカレーを配達します(笑)

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