Autumn is come !

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I live in Tokyo ,Japan.
In Tokyo , autumn is come.

Trees are colored.
Sky is beautiful !

At night ,many stars appears .

I am sutadying about ``stress manegment ` now.
Someday ,I hope to share everything I learned .

秋がきました。(あきがきました。)

私は日本の東京に住んでいます。
(わたしは にほんの とうきょうにすんでいます。)

木々は紅葉しています。
(きぎは こうようしています。)

空は美しいです。
(そらはうつくしいです。)

夜には沢山の星が現れます。
(よるには たくさんの ほしが あらわれます。)
私は今「ストレスマネジメント」にについて学んでいます。
(私はいま「すとれすまねじめんと」について まなんでいます。)

学んでいることを 何時か皆さんと分かち合いたいです。
(まなんでいることを いつか みななさんと わかちあいたいです。)

Nov 06th 2009 16:47 Futsuriai

  • Autumn is come !
  • Autumn is here!

 

  • I live in Tokyo ,Japan.
  • I live in Tokyo, Japan.

 

  • In Tokyo , autumn is come.
  • In Tokyo, it's already autumn.

 

  • Trees are colored.
  • Leaves are changing colors.

 

  • Sky is beautiful !
  • The sky is beautiful!

 

  • At night ,many stars appears .
  • At night, many stars come out.

 

  • I am sutadying about ``stress manegment ` now.
  • I am studying about "stress management" right now.

 

  • Someday ,I hope to share everything I learned .
  • Someday, I hope to share everything I learned.

 
Commas follow the word on the left without a space, then a space, then a word.
For example:
A, B.
NOT: A ,B or A , B.

That sounds beautiful... In Montreal, it seems like Winter is almost here...
Nov 06th 2009 16:47 a_few_lines

  • Autumn is come !
  • Autumn has come! (or: Autumn is here!)

 

  • I live in Tokyo ,Japan.
  • I live in Tokyo, Japan.

 

  • Trees are colored.
  • The trees are colored.

 

  • Sky is beautiful !
  • The sky is beautiful!

 

  • At night ,many stars appears .
  • At night, many stars appear.

 

  • I am sutadying about ``stress manegment ` now.
  • I am studying about 'stress management' now.

 

  • Someday ,I hope to share everything I learned .
  • Someday, I hope to share everything I've learned.

 
最近、いい天気ですね。
Take it easy!
Nov 06th 2009 18:23 choco

  • In Tokyo , autumn is come.
  • In Tokyo , it has become autumn is come.

 

  • Trees are colored.
  • The trees are changing colors.

 

  • Someday ,I hope to share everything I learned .
  • Someday, I hope to share everything I've learned with everyone.

 
corrected what i could from what's left (:
it's really pretty when the leaves change colors~ it hasn't really happened in my area... the leaves just die... how sad is that!
Nov 06th 2009 23:47 ~Jala~ // ~ジャラ~

You were already corrected, so I will just comment!

Azuki is so cute!!! =^_^= Thank you for the photo!

So many stars appear, even in Tokyo? I wish that I could see the autumn in Japan. ^_^ Maybe someday...

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