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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of yamato's latest journal entries Jan 30th 2010 14:41
I have not loged in this site for long time because of busy.
I'm sorry to friends who have given me messages.

In fact I decided to go sutudy abroad to U.S.
I'm preparing document for applying.

Now I have troubles about writing mail in English to University I will apply.

This is part of the cover letter I will send the school.
Probably there is poor expression and have many mistakes in grammer.

I apply to your school.
I have enveloped required documents except the document of affidavid of financial support from my company.
I have not enveloped this because of the delay of procedure by the bank but I will be able to get this and send soon.

And I plan to improve my skills of English through having education in language shool and your language academy after going to U.S in March.



Jan 31st 2010 00:48 spotvin

  • I have not loged in this site for long time because of busy.
  • I have not logged into this site for a long time because I've been busy.

 

  • I'm sorry to friends who have given me messages.
  • I'm sorry to my friends who sent me messages.

 

  • In fact I decided to go sutudy abroad to U.
  • In fact, I decided to study abroad in the U.S.

 

  • I'm preparing document for applying.
  • I'm preparing the application documents. (or: I'm preparing my application.)

 

  • Now I have troubles about writing mail in English to University I will apply.
  • Now I have troubles about (difficulty) writing my mail a letter in English to the university I will apply to. (Or even better: to the university where I will apply)

 

  • This is part of the cover letter I will send the school.
  • This is part of the cover letter (that) I will send to the school.

 

  • Probably there is poor expression and have many mistakes in grammer.
  • There are probably poor (wrong) expressions and many grammatical mistakes.

 

  • I apply to your school.
  • I am sending this letter to apply to your school.

 

  • I have enveloped required documents except the document of affidavid of financial support from my company.
  • I have enclosed all required documents except the document of affidavit of financial support from my company.

 

  • I have not enveloped this because of the delay of procedure by the bank but I will be able to get this and send soon.
  • I have not enclosed this because of procedural delays at the bank, but I will be able to get it and send it soon.

 

  • And I plan to improve my skills of English through having education in language shool and your language academy after going to U.
  • And I plan to improve my English skills throughout my education at your language school and your language academy after going to the U.S.

 
Good luck with your application!

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