Competion project_03
Jan 22nd 2010 17:35
Arranged weirs rotate in a count-clockwise direction. To help the Marine Satellite rotate against the current, the propeller which is placed bottom of it will rotate in a clockwise direction. However, the trash that is tossed about by the waves cannot take into the satellite. Therefore, it requires a transformation to make an appropriate path for accumulation. Now, plastic litter comes into storage through crevices cannot escape back to the sea.
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Competition project_03
The arranged wires (?) rotate in a counter-clockwise direction.
To help the Marine Satellite rotate against the current, the propeller which is placed on the bottom of it (or: below it, beneath it) will rotate in a clockwise direction. ("which is" can be omitted here)
However, the trash that is tossed about by the waves cannot be taken in to (?) the satellite.
Therefore, it requires a transformation (a transformation is necessary?) to make an appropriate path for accumulation.
Now, plastic litter comes into storage through crevices and cannot escape back to the sea.
Also, a concept like "propeller" or "arranged weirs" get an "a(n)" in its first appearance in the text. If you've already introduced it (or the reader has some previous/shared knowledge of it), you should use "the."
Here's my version of your text. I'm guessing at your intended meaning at times. Your jargon is unfamiliar to me and I don't understand your image.
"The arranged weirs rotate counterclockwise. A propeller mounted under the weirs pushes the rotation against ocean current. Trash that's tossed about by waves can't enter the satellite's chamber(s). A transformation (?) is needed to make a path for the trash to the inside of the [device]. Trash passes through angled openings and accumulates in the storage chamber(s) where it can't escape back out to sea."
It's not clear to me what a "transformation" is. Some kind of calming stage so that the trash can drift into the trap opening? Also, why do you suddenly say "plastic litter" instead of trash?