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Have you watched HEROES?

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of clapon's latest journal entries Oct 03rd 2009 01:23
I have been watching an American TV drama "HEROES".
It's very mysterious story.

Few months ago, I and my partner found the DVDs at a rental DVD store.
Its TV commercial broadcasted in Japan at that time, and we knew at Japanese TV show that Japanese man Masi Oka was casted in it.
"Yatta~!" , he shouted in the commercial.

We had watched 4 stories per week.
Now we have been watching season 2.

One of the attractive points about it I thought is that there are no main characters.
Everyone in the drama has each power, everyone needs the others power to save the earth.

I like "Hiro" and "Matt".
Matt looks like my ex-co-worker! (Of course my ex-co-worker is Japanese.)

We're looking forward to watching season 3.
They are in a rental DVD store now!
But their rental fee is a little expensive because they are just released.

We're thinking how does this story ends!
Oct 03rd 2009 01:51 zabe
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  • Japanese

  • It's very mysterious story.
  • It's a very mysterious story.
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  • Few months ago, I and my partner found the DVDs at a rental DVD store.
  • Few months ago, my partner and I found the DVDs at a rental DVD store. (It is more natural to change the word order a little bit.)
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  • Its TV commercial broadcasted in Japan at that time, and we knew at Japanese TV show that Japanese man Masi Oka was casted in it.
  • Its TV commercials broadcasted in Japan at that time, and we knew from a Japanese TV show that the Japanese man Masi Oka was casted in it.
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  • We had watched 4 stories per week.
  • We had watched 4 stories per week.
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  • Now we have been watching season 2.
  • Now we are watching season 2.
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  • One of the attractive points about it I thought is that there are no main characters.
  • One of the attractive points about it, (comma) I thought, (comma) is that there are no main characters. (Having "I thought" in the middle of the sentence requires having commas around it because it can be considered non-essential information. However, if you move it to the beginning of the sentence, "I thought one of the..." a comma is not needed.)
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  • Everyone in the drama has each power, everyone needs the others power to save the earth.
  • Everyone in the drama has a power, and everyone needs the each other's power to save the Earth.
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  • We're thinking how does this story ends!
  • We're thinking, "how does this story ends!" (Or you could say, "We are thinking about how this story ends!")
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I really enjoyed Heroes season 1. I did not like season 2 as much as the first season.
Oct 04th 2009 15:41 clapon
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  • English

Hi zabe!
Thank you for your further corrections.
The present perfect ( such as "have done" ) is difficult for me.

I'm watching it with Japanese subtitles, but I become to be able to listen some dialogues!
How about season 3?

See you!
Oct 04th 2009 18:02 bon
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  • Japanese

  • They are in a rental DVD store now!
  • They are available at the rental DVD stores now!
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  • We're thinking how does this story ends!
  • We're wondering about how does this story ends!
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A lot of people seem to like this series a lot! I personally have only watched the first episode, I thought it was very interesting! But I never remember to watch it when it's on TV, so I don't know anything about the story :(
clapon
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