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Could you help me wait a moment?I have to express his introducing in English in my class

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Mark.'s latest journal entries Sep 15th 2009 16:55 help introducing himself. me~~~~please~~~^^;
As you know, I have to express a friend of mine. It's like a presentation. Please help me some wrong sentences.

Hello, everyone.

It's nice to meet you and thank you for being here to express.

For those who don't know him, I'm going to introduce himself.

And you know, He is looking good. So, Listen carefully if you don't
have boy-friend, okay? . Okay.

His name is Su-Yong, Kim. He is twenty years old. It means he is
freshman now. Awesome!

His major is department of Animal Life Sciences.

He lives Chang-Dong(창동,It is a downtown name) in Seoul.

Probably, Does anyone live Chang-Dong? Oh~no,,,That's too bad.

I think it's a very good opportunity to close with him.. haha.

He likes playing computer game, such as "The World of Wind".

I think it's a little old games. Anyway, He likes listening music as well.

Specially, His favorite music is Rock.

I hardly ever see the people. This guy is also like it.

I don't know exactly who is the good singer in Rock, but He said
"Muse", "Super Kid" are really good and fantastic.

And.. He likes all kind of chicken foods.

It's okay whatever chicken. Suddenly I wonder if he ate turkey or not.

But, He doesn't like the food is Seaweed Cucumber Soup.

I think he is really hate them. So, Be careful when you treat his dinner.

And he would like to go to Osaka in Japan during vacation.

There are a lot of shopping center, restaurant, old-fashioned restaurant, castle, huge aquarium etc.

I don't know what a famous there is, but I'm sure he's want to go there.

If you want to go there, too..How about go along with him??

I think this time is really good chance.

Finally, His future plan is relate to work in Japan.

I think he's want to trade work with Japanese or sell some Items to Japan.

I hope he'll good trader.

Thank you for listening.
Sep 15th 2009 17:23 Alistair

  • Could you help me wait a moment?I have to express his introducing in English in my class
  • Could you help me wait for a moment? I have to express his introduce a friend in to my English in my class.
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  • As you know, I have to express a friend of mine.
  • As you know, I have to express introduce a friend of mine.
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  • Please help me some wrong sentences.
  • Please help me some wrong correct my sentences.
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  • It's nice to meet you and thank you for being here to express.
  • It's nice to meet you and thank you for being here to express listen to me today.
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  • For those who don't know him, I'm going to introduce himself.
  • I'm going to introduce my friend, for those who don't know him. I'm going to introduce himself.
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  • And you know, He is looking good.
  • And you know, He is looking good.
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  • So, Listen carefully if you don't
  • So, listen carefully if you don't
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  • have boy-friend, okay?
  • have boyfriend, okay?
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  • It means he is
  • It Which means he is
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  • freshman now.
  • a freshman.
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  • Awesome!
  • Awesome!
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  • His major is department of Animal Life Sciences.
  • His major is department of animal life sciences.
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  • He lives Chang-Dong(창동,It is a downtown name) in Seoul.
  • He lives in Chang-Dong (창동, It is a downtown name suburb) in Seoul.
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  • Probably, Does anyone live Chang-Dong?
  • There's probably, Does anyone someone here who lives in Chang-Dong, right?
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  • I think it's a very good opportunity to close with him..
  • I think it's now is a very good opportunity to close with get to know him my friend..
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  • He likes playing computer game, such as "The World of Wind".
  • He likes playing computer games, such as "The World of Wind".
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  • I think it's a little old games.
  • I think it's this game is a little old. games.
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  • Anyway, He likes listening music as well.
  • Anyway, he likes listening to music as well.
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  • Specially, His favorite music is Rock.
  • Specially, His favorite music is rock.
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  • I hardly ever see the people.
  • I hardly ever see the people.
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  • This guy is also like it.
  • This guy is also like it.
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  • I don't know exactly who is the good singer in Rock, but He said
  • I don't really know exactly who is the any good singer in rock groups, but he said
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  • "Muse", "Super Kid" are really good and fantastic.
  • "Muse" and "Super Kid" are really good and fantastic.
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  • He likes all kind of chicken foods.
  • He likes all kinds of chicken foods with chicken in it.
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  • It's okay whatever chicken.
  • It's okay whatever chicken.
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  • Suddenly I wonder if he ate turkey or not.
  • Suddenly I wonder if he ate eats turkey or not.
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  • But, He doesn't like the food is Seaweed Cucumber Soup.
  • But I know, he doesn't like the food is to eat Seaweed Cucumber Soup.
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  • I think he is really hate them.
  • I think he is really hates them it.
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  • So, Be careful when you treat his dinner.
  • So, Be careful remember that when if you treat his him to dinner.
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  • And he would like to go to Osaka in Japan during vacation.
  • And He would like to go to Osaka in Japan during the vacation.
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  • There are a lot of shopping center, restaurant, old-fashioned restaurant, castle, huge aquarium etc.
  • In Osaka there are a lot of shopping centers, restaurants, old-fashioned restaurants, castles, huge aquariums etc.
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  • I don't know what a famous there is, but I'm sure he's want to go there.
  • I don't know what a anywhere famous there is, but I'm sure he's will want to go there too.
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  • How about go along with him??
  • How about Perhaps you can go along with him??
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  • I think this time is really good chance.
  • I think this time is really good chance.
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  • Finally, His future plan is relate to work in Japan.
  • Finally, his plan for the future plan is relate to work in a job that has connections with Japan.
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  • I think he's want to trade work with Japanese or sell some Items to Japan.
  • I think he's wants to trade work with Japanese or sell some items to Japan.
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  • I hope he'll good trader.
  • I hope he'll become a good trader.
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Sep 15th 2009 23:54 Mark.

Thank you very much^^!
Mark.
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