Oh my god.

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These days I work at Japanese Restaurant. I thought they worried about me everything, but it wasn't. It drives me crazy. Always say, "You should say something"
Even they put the dishes and small things when I was washing dishes. So I think
I say "thank you" hundreds and hundreds times per a day.
Small and tiny rules.. I can't believe it...Too much!!!
I just want to tell somebody what I am doing now. It is getting stressful.
I really want to adapt it, but I am afraid it would be take a lot of time.
I just ..I just need some friends to talk with this, but I don't want to
burden to my friends. How can I come over it??
May 23rd 2011 18:19 Izzaty

  • These days I work at Japanese Restaurant.
  • These days I work at a Japanese restaurant.

 

  • I thought they worried about me everything, but it wasn't.
  • (I'm not sure what you mean by this... did you think they were worried about you, or were they making you worry about everything?)

 

  • Always say, "You should say something"
  • They always say, "You should say something"

 

  • Even they put the dishes and small things when I was washing dishes.
  • Even They even put added more the dishes and small things for me to wash when I was doing the dishes.

 

  • I say "thank you" hundreds and hundreds times per a day.
  • I say "thank you" hundreds and hundreds of times per a day.

 

  • Small and tiny rules..
  • These small and tiny rules..

 

  • I can't believe it...
  • I can't believe it them...

 

  • Too much!!!
  • They're just too much!!!

 

  • I just want to tell somebody what I am doing now.
  • I just want need to tell somebody what I am doing experiencing now. ***(or)*** I just want feel like to telling somebody what I am doing experiencing now.

 

  • I really want to adapt it, but I am afraid it would be take a lot of time.
  • I really want to adapt to it my work environment, but I am afraid it would be take a lot of time.

 

  • I just need some friends to talk with this, but I don't want to
  • I just need some friends to talk with about this, but I don't want to

 

  • burden to my friends.
  • be a burden to my friends.

 

  • How can I come over it??
  • How can I come get over it??

 
Hi Mark,

Good job on the post. However, do remember to:
1. use pronouns (e.g. they, these)
2. stay consistent with the number of things when referring to one or a few objects (e.g. for many things, use 'they'; for one thing, use 'it').

All the best! :)

-Izzaty
May 24th 2011 01:55 Mark.
I appreciate your help!! Thanks a million`!!
Mark.
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