Trip to Cádiz

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Isabel's latest journal entries Jan 20th 2011 04:10

Hello to everyone. I´m really busy these days so I haven´t time to write in here so often than before.
I´ll go to Cádiz next March. Me and my friends will spend 7 days. I'm looking forward to this trip.
This new year I will have too much work and maybe will have not holidays. That is why I NEED to take a break before the most hard come over my job. (^_^)
You can to check few photos about Cádiz. I think is a nice place to stay and enjoy.
Would you like to join me?? hahaha Anyway, I will tell you how was my trip on Lang-8.

See you and have a nice week!


Jan 20th 2011 07:10 ~♥Nacchi♥~

  • I´m really busy these days so I haven´t time to write in here so often than before.
  • I´m really busy these days so I haven´t time to write on here as often as before. You usually do things "on" the internet, so instead of using "in" like "write in my diary," you should use "on," because it's the internet. ^^ You can also say, "...I haven't had time to write on here so often," and omit "than before."

 

  • I´ll go to Cádiz next March.
  • I´ll go to Cádiz next March. If you mean March 2011, you should say, "this March." If you mean March 2012, then "next March" is appropriate.

 

  • Me and my friends will spend 7 days.
  • I and my friends will spend 7 days there. Or "Me and my friends will be there for 7 days." Also, in formal English, usually the speaker puts him or herself last, as in, "My friends and me." This is a good grammar check, because now you see that if you omit "my friends," "me" is incorrect, because you're left with, "Me will be there for 7 days," so you see you need to use "I" instead. ^^ Does that make sense?

 

  • This new year I will have too much work and maybe will have not holidays.
  • This new year I will have too much work and might not get any holidays.

 

  • That is why I NEED to take a break before the most hard come over my job.
  • That is why I NEED to take a break before the hardest part of my job comes. I think this is what you meant, but I'm not completely sure. ^^;

 

  • You can to check few photos about Cádiz.
  • You can see a few photos of Cádiz. Or "you can check out a few photos of Cadiz."

 

  • I think is a nice place to stay and enjoy.
  • I think it is a nice place to stay and enjoy.

 

  • hahaha Anyway, I will tell you how was my trip on Lang-8.
  • hahaha Anyway, I will tell you how my trip was on Lang-8.

 
Muy bien. ^^
Just a few small corrections. I hope you enjoy your vacation! Cádiz looks beautiful! I can't wait to hear how it is. :)
Jan 20th 2011 08:10 Isabel
Thank you so much Nacchi!! (^_^) I will do my best with English.
Jan 20th 2011 12:55 naoki

Hola! A mí también me gustaría ir a Cádiz, pero no tengo dinero ni tiempo :)
Jan 20th 2011 15:24 maxa
wao!so nice place!I envy you!!!can I join?hahahahaha XD
anyway pls enjoy it and take care!I'm looking forward to seeing your report of trip:D
Jan 21st 2011 19:37 Isabel
hahahaha Thanks, Maxa (^_^) I hope to enjoy my trip! I will write to you guys on Lang-8!
Jan 21st 2011 19:32 Isabel
Hola Naoki! Mi viaje a Cádiz no será muy caro, así podré ir porque yo tampoco tengo mucho dinero ahora hehehehe
Gracias por escribirme ;-)

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