Epidemic Yawns

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of metheglin's latest journal entries May 08th 2010 02:58 yawn
A yawn is interesting.
When you see your friend yawning, you can't put up with something welling up from back of your throat.

Yawns have the power of spread.

When I yawn in front of a baby, the baby surely yawn too. (Adults have shame mind so we try to suppress it, haha.)
Babies are cute.
May 08th 2010 03:08 Lovable Pandas

  • Yawns have the power of spread.
  • Yawns have a way of spreading.

 

  • When I yawn in front of a baby, the baby surely yawn too.
  • When I yawn in front of a baby, the baby surely yawns too.

 

  • (Adults have shame mind so we try to suppress it, haha.)
  • (Adultskind of feel bad about it,so we try to suppress it, haha.)

 
May 08th 2010 10:10 connfucius

  • When you see your friend yawning, you can't put up with something welling up from back of your throat.
  • When you see your friend yawning, you (just) can't put up with something welling up in the back of your throat.

 

  • Yawns have the power of spread.
  • Yawns have a contagious effect.

 

  • When I yawn in front of a baby, the baby surely yawn too.
  • When I yawn in front of a baby, the baby will surely yawn, too / the baby will also surely yawn.

 

  • (Adults have shame mind so we try to suppress it, haha.)
  • Adults on the other hand, feel a sense of shame so we try to suppress it, haha. / Adults feel a bit ashamed when yawning in public, so they try to suppress it, haha. I know you are also an adult, but you could use "they" as third person as an alternative

 

  • Babies are cute.
  • Babies are (so) cute. I just added "so" to emphasize the comparison with adults

 
May 08th 2010 17:40 metheglin

@Lovable Pandas, @connfucius
Thank you for the corrections!!
Thank you for giving more vocabulary!!

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