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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of namaz's latest journal entries Jul 21st 2009 18:38 music english jazz madlib

Today I wanted to go school library after I ate lunch. I need to return 3 books and borrow some new books. Then go electronics store near the school for checking the price of USB video capture board. After that, have a little break at Starbucks next to electronics store with Maccha Frappuccino. On my way home, I planed to go record store to buy vinyl version of Mos-def new album 'the ecstatic'.

But I woke up now. 6:00 pm.
School library will close at 7:00 pm. eh

my dream saved my money.

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♪ Joe McDuphrey Experience - Parallel Worlds (from Experience EP)
This album produced by Madlib. the same producer of 'ecstatic' . He makes very smooth sounds like floating feeling. It suits my mood exactly.
Jul 21st 2009 19:15 jri048

  • Today I wanted to go school library after I ate lunch.
  • Today I wanted to go to the school library after I ate lunch.
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  • I need to return 3 books and borrow some new books.
  • I needed to return 3 books and borrow some new books.
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  • Then go electronics store near the school for checking the price of USB video capture board.
  • Then I wanted to go to an electronics store near the school to check the price of a USB video capture board.
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  • After that, have a little break at Starbucks next to electronics store with Maccha Frappuccino.
  • After that, I wanted to have a little break at the Starbucks next to the electronics store with Mocha Frappuccino .
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  • On my way home, I planed to go record store to buy vinyl version of Mos-def new album 'the ecstatic'.
  • On my way home, I planned to go to the record store to buy the vinyl version of Mos-def's new album 'the ecstatic'.
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  • But I woke up now.
  • But I only woke up now.
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  • School library will close at 7:00 pm.
  • The school library will close at 7:00 pm.
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  • my dream saved my money.
  • my dream saved me money.
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i think you just need to remember to write.... [to go to the] you often write The go ____store. so just write Then go to the ______ store. I hope this has helped. Keep upthe good work you are doing great ^ ^ and it was no problem correcting you other entry, I also got the youtube video to work, both of the songs were so mellow and soothing.
Jul 21st 2009 19:35 namaz

I appreciate your help and fast response!
Yes it's true I am always inattention with 'the & a' or 'to' things.
I will do double check before submitting next time.

I didn't know the word "soothing" but it's very good expression!
I checked in the dictionary now. I would like to use it someday. :)

p.s. Maccha Frappuccino is 抹茶フラペチーノ in Japanese.
It tastes like sweet green tea! yum yum
namaz
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