I bought an iPhone4S

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Jun 12, 2012 00:41 diary
Today, I bought an iPhone4S.
I used a Japanese Android phone.

One week ago, a letter alive from my cell phone's company.
It was written that if you change cell phone now, I'll give you a ten thousand en service.

I want to write many lang-8 entries with iPhone.
I wish there was a lang-8 application.
Lindsay
Jun 12, 2012 02:44
  • I used a Japanese Android phone.

  • Before, I used a Japanese Android phone. (or "I used to use a Japanese Android phone")

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  • One week ago, a letter alive from my cell phone's company.

  • One week ago, a letter arrived from my cell phone's company.

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  • It was written that if you change cell phone now, I'll give you a ten thousand en service.

  • It was written that if you change the cell phone now, They will give you a ten thousand yen service.

    Although in Japanese it is written "en", in English we usually write "yen" ^_^

 
  • I want to write many lang-8 entries with iPhone.

  • I want to write many lang-8 entries with the / my iPhone.

 

I bet it's useful for writing on the go! ^_^

Hugh
Jun 12, 2012 06:34
  • It was written that if you change cell phone now, I'll give you a ten thousand en service.

  • It said, "If you change cell phones now, we'll give you a ten thousand Yen discount."

    Japanese 「サービス」is not the same as English "service". I suggest you check your dictionary.

 
  • I want to write many lang-8 entries with iPhone.

  • I want to write many lang-8 entries on my iPhone.

 
  • I wish there was a lang-8 application.

  • I wish there were a lang-8 app.

    We usually use the short form "app".

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mourishin
Jun 13, 2012 12:01
  • It was written that if you change cell phone now, I'll give you a ten thousand en service.

  • It said that if I change cell phones now, I'll get a ten thousand yen service.

 

maybe someone will make an app! =3

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