Applying for a scolarship.. Help me editing, please!
Apr 04th 2010 06:06
Dear Scholarship Committee,
I am writing to you to express my desire to participate in the Scholarship Programme for English Teachers 2010-2011, applying for Teachers Development Course (TDC) at The Anglo.
Two years ago, I was granted a scholarship to study the Teacher Training Course and thanks to this training I have had better tools to improve my teaching experience. This training was reflected on my performance -which has been rewarded- and nowadays, I have more responsibilities in the university where I work. This situation compels me to be updated and better qualified to select, adapt and design language syllabi and material.
The TDC syllabi states that after completing the training, the participant will have acquired skills on evaluation material and syllabus design. For those reasons, I am really interested in taking it. Not only can I develop the skills needed at my current job but also I can enhance my comprehension of the teaching-learning precepts in more advanced students -the Achilles’ heel in the majority of language schools. Using both, skills and knowledge, I am sure I will be able to make proposals to help my students to compete with the international standards.
However, in this moment, as I am still studying I can't work full time and I do not have a great income to afford the Course. The TDC represents for me an excellent opportunity to continue improving and I wouldn’t like that my financial restraint problem stops me. Due to this situation, I am totally reliant on the generosity of the foundation to be granted the scholarship for the TDC.
I am looking forward to receiving the opportunity to study at The Anglo and to make a great contribution to my students.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours faithfully,
Jessica Viviana Toledo Aranda
I am writing to you to express my desire to participate in the Scholarship Programme for English Teachers 2010-2011, applying for Teachers Development Course (TDC) at The Anglo.
Two years ago, I was granted a scholarship to study the Teacher Training Course and thanks to this training I have had better tools to improve my teaching experience. This training was reflected on my performance -which has been rewarded- and nowadays, I have more responsibilities in the university where I work. This situation compels me to be updated and better qualified to select, adapt and design language syllabi and material.
The TDC syllabi states that after completing the training, the participant will have acquired skills on evaluation material and syllabus design. For those reasons, I am really interested in taking it. Not only can I develop the skills needed at my current job but also I can enhance my comprehension of the teaching-learning precepts in more advanced students -the Achilles’ heel in the majority of language schools. Using both, skills and knowledge, I am sure I will be able to make proposals to help my students to compete with the international standards.
However, in this moment, as I am still studying I can't work full time and I do not have a great income to afford the Course. The TDC represents for me an excellent opportunity to continue improving and I wouldn’t like that my financial restraint problem stops me. Due to this situation, I am totally reliant on the generosity of the foundation to be granted the scholarship for the TDC.
I am looking forward to receiving the opportunity to study at The Anglo and to make a great contribution to my students.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours faithfully,
Jessica Viviana Toledo Aranda
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Two years ago, I was granted a scholarship to study the Teacher Training Course. Thanks to this training I have had better tools to improve my teaching experience.
This training has reflected positively on my performance, which has been rewarded!I have used these skills gain responsibility andenhance my role within my organization.
My new role requires me to stay ahead of the curve;to continuously adapt and design language syllabi and material relevant to the real world.
For those reasons, I am really interested in taking it.
Not only can I develop the skills needed at my current job, but also I can enhance my comprehension of the teaching-learning dynamicswith more advanced students.-the Achilles’ heel in the majority of language schools.(Try to stay away from negative comments)
Using both, skills and knowledge, I am confident I will be able to make proposals to help create an environment to allow my students to flourishcompared tointernational standards.
However, in this moment, as I am still studying I can't work full time and I do not have a great income to afford the Course.Currently, as I study and build talents for developing our future leaders, I am unable to also work full time.
The TDC represents for me an excellent opportunity to continue improving;while eliminating a potential financial barrier to my career development, and ultimately the development of my students.
Due to this situation, I am totally reliant on the generosity of the foundation to be granted the scholarship for the TDC.Due to these circumstances, my participation in this program appearstotally reliant on the generosity and judgement of the foundation.
Thank you for consideration of my application.
My comments for this situation could be totally wrong, so please review and incorporate as you see fit. Typically these types of documents go through many iterations before you land on a final copy
Good Luck.